Rubime said: "I can't stand it when people bash someone." and
"Davis is a stupid desperate loser."
Total fucking hypocrite. You Americans are fucking retarded.

Okay well I have a lot of things to say abou this story. So I hope you don't take anything in offense and if you have anything to say to me here's my email, .
Well first my thoughts on the fic. Well, I liked it. I can't stand it when people bash someone in a fic (seriously they wouldn't like it if they had it done to one of their charas), but honestly I didn't see a lot of bashing in this story. Accept you stating the truth, Davis is a stupid desperate loser.
Davis:: Hey! If you think that then don't include me in your stories!
Shut up! And anyway you're out of charactor when I write about you. Any way, I am glad you're not a stupid imature person who thinks just because thay almost 100 stories (I'm commenting on this later). And I read your bio and you seem nice! _
Okay now about your writing style! I like it! You don't put a lot of description in what I've read but you still make your stories good. I think it's cute! -
Also I like how you DON'T use Japanese words in your story! I hate when people do taht. It makes people look stupid! And some people say kawaii so much it's starting to annoy me! .
And so I leave you with my last words; Keep writing, you obviously have talent (anyone with eyes can see that) and I hope you reach 100 stories soon! GOOD LUCK!
Rubime

Great! That song's gonna be stuck in my head ALL day, which I guess is a good thing because tommarrow I have to sing my own version in front of the WHOLE SCHOOL! That was pretty good

Me: (beats up writer) You promise to stop bashing?

Writer: (sobbing) YES! I PROMISE!

Me: No actually, you better swear it.

Writer: OKAY! I'M SORRY, AND I SWEAR I WON'T DO IT AGAIN!

Me: (puts writer down) And I trust you'll keep this promise (kicks writer in the shin)

Even though I LOVE Davis, I read the story, and LOVED it! _

"Sora and Jun got run over by Stantler,

Because they're morons, yes they are,

You can say that Pokemon is stupid,

As for me and Gatomon,we agree."

good story but “Mistletoe sounds like a disease, just like sea monkeys!” just doesn't make much sense

HA HA HA! I LOVE IT! SO MUCH DAVIS BASHING! Thanks for letting me put your fan fics on my site Lia!

Roe

_ Amusing. Highly. Bash the Davish! _ Reindeer...::giggles insanely:: FUNNY!

QG

Very very funny. You can guess what I will be singing around school from now on!

HeY! What's with you taking my Pen Name? It doesn't matter, I'm Lia Seastone. I bet you're something else with a last name. Hahahahahahahahaahaha! I think that your fic is fuuunnny! Very goood!

Mwahahahahahahahaha! Guess who's back and i full force! You lucked out that my hardrive crashed and I lost the survivor chapter with Lia in it... And don't worry becasue Hannibal is doing the job right now, But I asure you Lia will meet an untimely demise Oh yes!

LOL! You are so good at this!

HA! DAVIS STINKZ!

More...more! I must have more Davis bashing! *choke* x_x _ v_v _