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Kara Agnarsdottir 1/31/12 . chapter 8
I'm interested in how the backstory works for shape and James to have a kid together... ?
M.E.S 50 10/2/11 . chapter 8
An excellent story, i wish you would consider finishing it.
Hannah42992 1/11/09 . chapter 8
I really like this story. You're doing a great job...please continue with it...)
Shadow12300 9/11/08 . chapter 8
update like ur life depended on it please
Crazy-Physco 1/2/08 . chapter 8
great chapter.
elementalmage2008 12/27/07 . chapter 8
SeilinStar,

It's a shame that such a wonderful story as this remains uncontinued for what is now about five years... I read through the story and was tragically disappointed when it stopped at the eighth chapter, and was hoping that you might reconsider and update sometime soon... i know it is very unlikely and i shouldn't get my hopes up for no reason, but i couldn't help it. I was genuinely moved to learn what happened next with your story. You have a fascinating set of characters and they each interact with each other in an interesting blend of cannon and original writing that is intriuging and i am rather hoping that even if i have to find a way to review a thousand times, you would consider writing more and updating this story, so that i can see the plot unfold.

sincerely,

EM'08
Yume Li 11/3/07 . chapter 5
I think you repeated chapter 4. The story is quite nice. When Voldemort returns, will Severus and Lucius still be deatheaters?
FOXANBU 4/17/07 . chapter 3
LOVE IT!

JA NE FOXANBU
FOXANBU 4/16/07 . chapter 1
UPDATE SOON!

FOXANBU
nikki 2/24/07 . chapter 8
please updat
sweetteetwo 12/14/06 . chapter 8
please let me know when you up date this fic at I like how this partray's snape as a father and how draco was able to see harry's color.
Beth5572 11/18/06 . chapter 8
I would love to see want you write next. I also hope Harry's founds out about how spaciale he is soon.

Thank you,

Terri
Marikili68 8/7/06 . chapter 8
i love your story update please
ppurpple 6/16/06 . chapter 8
i really like ur story

i hope u update real soon

its really beautiful

and its give me hope and inspiration
allieb13 5/4/06 . chapter 8
ok he's two how can he read and "smile knowingly"? other than that god story.
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