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Hannah42992
2009-01-11 . chapter 8
I really like this story. You're doing a great job...please continue with it...=)
Shadow12300
2008-09-11 . chapter 8
update like ur life depended on it please
Crazy-Physco
2008-01-02 . chapter 8
great chapter.
elementalmage2008
2007-12-27 . chapter 8
SeilinStar,
It's a shame that such a wonderful story as this remains uncontinued for what is now about five years... I read through the story and was tragically disappointed when it stopped at the eighth chapter, and was hoping that you might reconsider and update sometime soon... i know it is very unlikely and i shouldn't get my hopes up for no reason, but i couldn't help it. I was genuinely moved to learn what happened next with your story. You have a fascinating set of characters and they each interact with each other in an interesting blend of cannon and original writing that is intriuging and i am rather hoping that even if i have to find a way to review a thousand times, you would consider writing more and updating this story, so that i can see the plot unfold.
sincerely,
EM'08
Yume Li
2007-11-03 . chapter 5
I think you repeated chapter 4. The story is quite nice. When Voldemort returns, will Severus and Lucius still be deatheaters?
JonasBandFan
2007-04-17 . chapter 3
LOVE IT!!


JA NE ~FOXANBU~
JonasBandFan
2007-04-16 . chapter 1
UPDATE SOON!


FOXANBU
nikki
2007-02-24 . chapter 8
please updat
sweetteetwo
2006-12-14 . chapter 8
please let me know when you up date this fic at I like how this partray's snape as a father and how draco was able to see harry's color.
Beth5572
2006-11-18 . chapter 8
I would love to see want you write next. I also hope Harry's founds out about how spaciale he is soon.



Thank you,



Terri
Marikili68
2006-08-07 . chapter 8
i love your story update please
cheza'flower'silver'wolf
2006-06-16 . chapter 8
i really like ur story

i hope u update real soon

its really beautiful

and its give me hope and inspiration
allieb13
2006-05-04 . chapter 8
ok he's two how can he read and "smile knowingly"? other than that god story.
deathtocommas
2005-12-17 . chapter 8
i like it
Shadow315
2005-10-07 . chapter 8
hey is this gonna be a hp(or severiun)/dm?!?!? tht'd be kool! MORE SOON plz
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