oh. WOW. I laughed so hard, I cried. This one-shot is hilarious!

Were it possible to die laughing, I'm pretty sure I would have.

Fave parts: (1) "At that moment, the brothers looked extraordinarily alike, the expressions on both faces revealing, in a way words could not, that the Great Dog Daemon, scourge of youkai and human alike, ruler of the Western lands, had somehow never found the time in his busy schedule to sit the boys down for a little talk."
(2)"She raised her eyes to where Sesshoumaru stood, shaken out of every semblance of cool detachment. Okay, maybe she could borrow an extra copy somewhere."

I especially enjoyed how dignified and prosaic Ah-Un's thread of thoughts were...to the extent that the fact that they were referring to the bike totally alluded me until it was totally apparent. Man, that was so funny! I am SO noting this in my faves. Love. :P

Can I say, I'm in love with everything you do. I had to stifle my laughter so hard that it actually hurt (For fear that my housemates may finally classify terminally insane.) I was genuinly concerned this was going to be really, really creapy for a moment there. But no.

Well done, well done

wow...that was amazingly written...and hilarious. loved it!!

O_O

*faints*


LOL, that's just hillarious! I was curious of what they may seek, but it's only Kagome's bike! Unbelivable! And Sesshomaru's face? Haha, wish I could see it right now! XD

Awesome, no wonder it got lots of reviews! :)

I'm laughing so hard right now. XD wunnerful

OMFG! That was ** hilarious! I couldn't stop laughing!! Good Job!

I-I can't phrase the feelings in my heart after reading this story...it was so funny...I..I can't believe what happened, that's great, OMG this story is so funny.
Sorry for not being able to say more, I'm just stunned by everything...Poor Kagome.

That was hilarious, well written, and beautiful!

OMG, hilarias.

That was great.. I laughed so hard my soda almost came out of my nose. I didn' t see it coming, but when it got there it ran me over like a mac truck. Thanks for sharing. P.S. I will never look at those two the same way again.

Ah and Un's prose was both beautiful and contrasted absolutely fantastically with the hilarity of the situation. The second I realized who or what exactly had earned their attentions, I was cracking up. Kudos to you to a funny idea and flawless execution!

omfg! how hilarious! XD so worth it!! and that part about Sesshy not knowing anything about sex.. priceless! XD oh hahahahahahahah!

hahahaahahaah oh my lord that was too much. When I first stumbled across this, it was mostly out of curiosity over why it had so many reviews but now I understand. Completely original and hilarious. I adore the use of Shakespearean language and quotes. This was a great piece :D

lol! I couldn't stop laughing once I realized that they were after Kagome's bike! AWESOME story!