This severly needs line breacks, the time lapses had me very confused in the beginning.

Wow I'm just stunned.That was a great story!It really kept me captivated till the very end.

true humans are evil, good story

Great story! I really like these epic, world changing event stories. It was really fun reading it.

Wow! this is excelent! Extremly well writen. Pitty Buffy stayed with Riley I really hate that guy and the ini ive

Very imaginative. Excellent story!

You're a really good writer. This is one of the best pieces of fanfiction I've read. Please write some more. I enjoyed the detail and your style of writing.

Great Story!

hmmm... I'm not quite sure what to make of this story. It was a good idea, a sort of epic story that spanned years, but I think it was too... simple, for such a grand idea. It was very well written and put together and I enjoyed it, so Bravo... but... entirely to sympathetic towards vampires. They're evil demons. That's the whole point of the Buffy saga... anyways, I'll shut up. I have mixed feelings about this story but overall, you managed to write a well crafted and intelligent story. Thanks for the fun

Wow, this was an incredible idea and it looks like you thought about it a lot. I liked the Willow/Spike-ness in this. :) Kudos for that. I also liked the whole reference to the Man in the Iron Mask. The last scene(s) were kind of bittersweet, I sort of expected the group to come together, but you did a great job of showing how awkwardly allied they were. Great work! :)

your story is great, but could u please help me w/ something? i want to submit stories, but i am so confused on how! please help me!