*blinks* Okay. Intersting story...is there any more?

I don't like General Clayton. Good story.

I really liked thos story. Can you say 'conflict'? Do you think you'll write more in this universe? Also, if you do, what about making it 'Slash', and we'll see how the General handles finding out Blair's Bi?

This sounds like there is another part to this story. Would a father really call his son by his last name? Why does he want him in the army? I think there is something else going on here.

This is good, BUT it is a little one-sided. The General should at least have a chance to explain himself; you've made him into a monster-and few people are monsters. He must have a reason-even a bad one-for doing what he does, and it seems unfair to allow Blair to tell him off and not let him tell his side of the story. However pigheaded and overbearing he is, he deserves at least that much.

This was a fairly good story. It has great potential. You could really extend it, maybe even make it into a series. I hope you consider my suggestion. I am itching to know what happens the next time Blair runs into "Daddy Dearest".

Great story! I want a sequal! I wonder why people have not been writing you!

Tammy