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| Aranel Abeille 2005-09-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseAmazing. I am completely awestruck. You handle the time changes so smoothly- and in fact the jumping around is part of what makes this story so awesome. Your writing is... wow. I'm speechless. This is now my favorite Alias fic. Ever. |
| Alexis6 2003-07-06 ch 1, | abuseThis has got to be one of my favorite Alias stories--put it somewhere in the top three. What I love about your fics (I sent you feedback for "Say What" a while ago) is that they are so well-written. I don't know how you approach the art and craft of writing (in terms of the number of drafts and idea formulation), but I do know (from what I can tell) that you don't half-** anything: everything is well-crafted and polished and sounds just right. "Cold as Any Stone" is an all-around great story--from concept to execution. What I love about this story in particular was the creative approach, the way the story was told out of order but made sense as the transitions were thematically connected. I was also impressed by the way you maintained the tension throughout, even though the story starts out at the end. That's something: you didn't rely on the audience asking "what's going to happen in the end?" in order to build the suspense. And like I said earlier, "Stone" is well-written and well-crafted, but because of the fractured narrative, it remains a little rough: it somehow strikes a fine balance between polished and raw. So great job. Consider me a fan, because I've been reading some of your other fics and I don't even watch Buffy. I look forward to your reading more of your stories (for Alias hopefully)... |
| OliviaB 2003-05-15 ch 1, | abusei can't remember who put up a rec for this story, maybe TWoP, but anyway, i am really glad i listened, it was really very well written, i'm going to read more of your stuff right now. |
| Duck 2003-05-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseI've read a lot of fics by a lot of different authors... Yours have always stood out to me, because you're so incredibly talented. "Say What?" will always be my favorite fic of all time, and I believe this one has kicked its way to the top as well. This left me speechless, and I've already read it more than once. I hope you feel inspired to write more Alias fics, because you are so amazing. *Duck |
| Princess Hunny Bee 2003-05-01 ch 1, anon. | abusewow. very good. the jumping back and forth from present to past was a little confusing, but i caught on after a while. i was really afraid he was going to die! im glad you arent one of those vaughn-killing authors. :) |
| Taffi-01 2003-05-01 ch 1, | abuseLoved that - like the complex way it was written - that's the way I'd love to write, but I think too linearly... ...cool but v weird ending though... are you going to do a follow up?? |
| nattie700 2003-05-01 ch 1, | abuseYay! Finally another Alias story. I've been killing myself waitng for another one from you guys! Say What was the best and normally I don't really like action kind of ones but I love yours! Ages ago I wrote to you asking for advice and you wrote back with a whole page. Thankyou so much! I can't tell you how much that meant to me. I took all your advice and I'm writing two Alias stories at the momment. Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou so much. Please write more Alias fics! |
| valley-girl2 2003-04-30 ch 1, | abuseomg, that was ABSOLUTELY fantastic, just great. throughout the whole story you cautiously let us know what was going on, it was just great. write more! expand this! whatever, something! |
| Alliecat3 2003-04-30 ch 1, | abuseOMG. What a fantastic story! It was brilliantly planned and executed and really had the feel of an episode. I didn't find it difficult to follow and I love the ambiguity of the ending. The characters were pitch perfect, and I'm glad you had Vaughn ask the question about hiding the ampoule, because I wondered that myself! The only tiny quibble I have is your use of the word "petrol" instead of "gas", which you may want to edit. Very well done and I look forward to more of your work! |
| iluvpie 2003-04-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseok.. im confused... the plot was to jolty... |
| iluvpie 2003-04-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseok.. im confused... the plot was to jolty... |
| snowangel 2003-04-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. This story was amazing. It was a little difficult to follow at first but got alot better. Very suspenseful! I think you wrote Sydney's character very well, great job! Im looking forward to more! (0: |
| Duck 2003-04-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. I'm totally totally blown away by this awesome piece of fic. You wrote my all time favorite story, "Say What?", and this comes to a close second. This had me twisted around, the way I like it, and just... I'm at a loss for words. |
| Raina 2003-04-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseHuh? What is that ening suposed to mean? It left me with an impending sense of doom.Really cool story though. Where did you get that idea. i could have never thought of that. |
| Nadja 2003-04-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. That was... wonderful. I don't quite know what to say. It was just... wow. Great job! |