Wow. This was really really good! I can't wait to read the next one!

Nela

Would u update please, it is very good.

I like this. I like this alot!

oh have mecy and continue oh pleese oh pleese.

I love it! (even if it was written 7 years ago,) please update some time this decade! :P

Cute, funny, and nice idea with the translation thing. There were some spelling problems, but just work on that. It was nothing major.

Suggestion: if you're having trouble, try writing down how you want the story to turn out first.

Great story. Very cute. The only critisism I have is that I think you said something about Daniel's parents being dead and then later you have them being alive. Otherwise this is a great story and I think you got their caractors as kids portrayed nicely.

-_-; What's wrong with your

stories is you don't update.

You probably won't ever even

read this! If you do, do

something with this story! I

want to know where it goes.

-_-; What's wrong with your

stories is you don't update.

You probably won't ever even

read this! If you do, do

something with this story! I

want to know where it goes.

i like it. nothing rong to me

please continue

Just one question, is this before or after his parents died

this is such an interestin story! Please update soon..

;_; Why haven't you written any more? I know it's been a while, but this is such a cute fic! I really want to see how this would turn out!

wow this story is good. You need to finish it. Please I know its been a while but its never too late.

Hi!

I've decided that I like your stories. This is cool, when will they see that they themselves are the people they are looking for?(They are the people, right?)

I can't wait!