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| golden-eyedwolf842 2005-12-17 ch 1,  | abuseGreat, but short. A little too short. Anyways, this was a very sweet fic! I would never be able to write like that! :P |
| Madam Spooky 2005-06-11 ch 1, | abuseSó sweet. I loved! |
| Unseen Watcher 2005-05-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseNo epic plot true, but nice and simple. Almost soothing really. |
| Alida of the Emerald Green ... 2004-07-12 ch 1, | abuseI DID wonder about that... Very nice job. And was he really talking in his sleep, or... And that would explain the naked Cleaos, too... |
| Mi and Tiph 2004-01-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseToo short -.- It's good, but SHORT! Make it a bit longer, please!? |
| rankydd 2003-12-10 ch 1, anon. | abusei think u could add another chapter or even extend this piece into a story |
| GoodGurl 2003-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw so kyoot! >O< HEE HEE! I luv it! |
| Mina Aino1 2003-05-16 ch 1, | abuseAw, very Kawaii! (^.^) |
| Dark shadow 2003-05-03 ch 1, anon. | abusecool story !! ( annoying orphen in the middle of the night .. looking or fights ^__^ ) .. please .. Im waiting for part 2 . |
| Rebel 2003-05-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting I really like it.hahaha it was cute.. |
| zacola 2003-05-01 ch 1, | abuseWow interisting take on the sleepwalking bit. Cleo and Orphen never did talk about her being grabed by The Bloody August, so there was no resolution. Hope you write more O/C pairing as I love his pairing. Off to your other fics now. |
| V-babe(too lazy to sign in,... 2003-04-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw... Sappy, but cute... I hope you write more stories like this. *sniff, sniff* So kawaii... lol. |
| GilShalos 2003-04-30 ch 1, | abuseShort but sweet. Good internal monologue on the insecurity which is very much a part of Cleo in the series. Too bad neither of them remembered anything in the morning. (There were a couple small typos/grammar issues, I can send what I saw in a private message if you want them.) |