I just found this story & have it enjoyed it very much. Very well written.

Love it! Fantastically IC and still mapping the begining of what could be Luke's descent into darkness. I do love Vader/Luke father/son fics!

Wow... Interesting story

I really like this story, but wow was it written a long time ago. The date it was published doesn't even have a year! I guess that is why this story's set-up is so weird. Keep writing!

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This was very good. I like it.

wow, loved it.

This is very moving. It's easy to understand how Luke could be drawn in by his father - it's in the reach of his hand, to have a parent that cares for him, he only has to accept it. Dangerously simple.

This is a wonderful story. You've wrote a while ago...

Where is part 2? It is so good that is a shame to let

end...are you still writing? If you are, you must continue this story...it is very intense...

I hope you consider continuing...it is a masterpiece!

:) SherazadeVader

interesting story . . .I enjoyed reading it.

Excellent story so far.

Jelp

Absolutely first-rate! Am rushing to read the next chapters!

Wonderful piece! I'm always on the lookout for fiction that treats the

Star Wars characters as human beings and makes them deal with realistic

situations and emotions. This author's done very well with both Luke and

Vader, making their actions and thoughts consistent with the characters

we see in the films, but also making them three-dimensional. It's especially

nice to see Vader as a complex character, rather than being completely good

when he's Anakin Skywalker and completely bad when he's Vader. Nice to see him

as a realistic combination of both. Well done, and thank you for writing this!

Interesting that Luke actually resorted to use the Dark Side, but besides that, I thought it was great. Especially when Vader was getting all father-like.

Oooo! an absolutely great Vader/Luke! That's my favorite high!

Great story.

I especially liked the way you had Obi-wan dying in sight of Luke put in a different light. He can certainly be seen as the cunning one, that crazy old wizard!