Why don't you have this as a continuing chapter fic?

I really like this series. . .

I don't really think that Vader could feel his pain like that because in Return of the Jedi, Luke's being tortured by Palpatine, and Vader doesn't really seem to react at all.

~ Jelp

Good stuff! No time for a longer review, I'm off to read Part 3 ...

I really like the way that Han and Vader are working together, and the way that Han stands up to him. Great job!

Poor Vaddy! This is so lovely.