the story is great and sad too but i would suggest a little less details because i start getting bored after a while.

so sad! i feel so bad for haku!

What about No-Face? o__o

I don`t think Haku stutters, does he? Of course, he could`ve changed over the years, but it just isn`t part of his character... =S

Raisuke`s not going to go with him, is he? Because then he`d have to have an Amulet too. =S You also got repetitive about Raisuke having an influential family. No biggie though, because it wasn`t much. =)

The subtitles said 'Rin'? o__O Woah. I guess it`s because Buena Vista released it, their romanization is sometimes wrong. For example, every time there`s in 'L' in someone`s name, they change it to an 'R'. Something about the way Japanese are supposed to pronounce thing. It`s absolutely adorable how they speak in English though, er, "Engrish". It`s a real word, I`m not being mean, because I used to speak that myself. XD

Sorry for the long explanation by the way. o__o;

You also seem to be contradicting what you said in the previous chapter, where Haku said that 'She wasn’t the prettiest girl he met, not even the cutest'. But you constantly have him saying that she was beautiful. I understand what you`re trying to say, but you might want to rephrase that. =) Also, I`d like to say that having an untidy room isn`t really part of Haku`s personality, surely he`d find some way to keep it clean? He`d probably have it messy one day, but weeks?

Again, sorry for the extremely long review. -__-; I got ahead of myself.

I had to read this chapter in a hurry, but I also found some mistakes. Nothing too bad, so don`t worry. =)

First off, it`s not Rin, it`s Lin. Though at times when I watched the movie, it sounded like 'Len'. ^__^; Secondly, it`s spelled Yubaba and Zeniba. You also seem to talk about a certain topic a lot, and accidentally repeat things. ^__^ But it`s not that bad, because you`re a really good writer, I can tell. =) By the way, what`s with the 'lover' concept? Haku was meant to look 12 and Chihiro was supposed to be 1o at the time.

Of course, don`t let this bother you if I`m the only one saying this. o__o It`s just constructive criticism. =) Anyway, WONDERFUL chapter! =D

Aw... =( That`s so sad. Then again, he`s going to come back, right? So while I click the review button, the the next button, I`ll hype myself up. XD

this is a really good story, plz update soon cuz i'm loving it, ^-^

Wow! this is real good so far, I'm going to put this on my favorites so I can read the rest later.

Wow I love this story so far PLEASE UPDATE!! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Ari

This is a great story. Come on and update and finish writing it. It is reall building up nice.

Read the whole thing. Came across a few spelling and grammer mistakes along with a few words missing or misplaced. But other wise it is really great.

If I can be of any help let me know.

UPDATE and Finish writing this story Please.

cute~ i am adding this 2 my favies list!

omg!! i just love this story! please update soon!!

/Suma Susaki\

*rubs temples* Relationships are so complicated! I swear if these people go around in circles more I will throw a fit!