Cool story, reading alot of fanfic today, running out of things to say for each...

Well, you already know that I really like this story, but I wanted to write an official review so here I am! I absolutely love the part when Sara comes in and scans the room. That's so like Sara. And of course I loved the ending. It was really sweet. It's good to see Grissom and Sara get together. Makes me a happy shipper. :-) Great job, Gitte!

*~* Karin *~*

Very nice, Gittedl. Very nice indeed, especially for a first fanfiction. Only minor imperfections! Either you're a natural writer or that friend of yours did an amazing job! :) Perfect last line "Whatever you say, Sara." Do write some more stories

Jane M.

I really like your story...Short, but nice.

Great! (but way to short! LOL)