 Miner603 2009-05-31 . chapter 1I actually like how it ended for both Lilith and Adam, as well as for Shinji and Asuka. |
 That guy over there 2005-08-10 . chapter 1 This is an awesome story. Except it was totally ruined by being labelled with the wrong genre. |
 Supercat 2003-05-02 . chapter 1 Um... Maybe I didn't get the joke because I've never read any of those crappy "Yui awakens" fics, but this really wasn't very funny. At all. Sorry. |
 Galthos 2003-05-02 . chapter 1This is a very good variation on the Yui/Lilith/Eva01 theme. Two thumbs up from this section of the peanut gallery. |