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| spacespork 2008-06-15 ch 51,  | abuseWow. That was really, really fantastic. Everyone was perfectly in character, and it was very enjoyable to read. That's also got to be one of the best endings ever. Great job! |
| UpperClassK9 2008-04-09 ch 3, | abuseHey, no fair! If you can lease Kurama, i want him too! And nice story. Though it might be better if it's in the usual format(i.e. long paragraphs, yadda, yadda), but never mind, it probably suits Inuyasha this way. |
| Demonic-Little-Angel 2008-03-24 ch 5, | abuse"Felt good, didn't it?" Miroku leaned back with something like a smile and closed his eyes. "Indeed..." That is hilarious! |
| Arishi 2008-03-20 ch 51, | abuseYou are genius. |
| Elaienar 2008-03-02 ch 51, | abuseWoah. Nice twist there at the end. 'Kay, I don't do the fangirl thing, but let me assure you that if I did, I'd be fangirling all over this story. I really, really like it. I think you're brilliant. Your Hojo was excellently done; his character was vivid. Congratulations on a job well done! |
| Elaienar 2008-03-02 ch 37, | abuse"What abuse?" I nearly died trying not to laugh out loud at that. It was priceless. |
| LightintheDarkess 2008-03-01 ch 51, | abusegood |
| chibi heishi 2008-02-23 ch 51, | abuseThis was nice. I would say more, but I stayed up until almost 6:30 am reading because I didn't want to stop. Really good, though. |
| manga 2007-12-03 ch 51, | abuseI like the story; it's pretty well paced and lots of fun but I put it on my favorites list for the scenes of Inuyasha getting his ears scratched, how he reacted and how he eventually dealt with it. That was so cute, so sweet but with just the right amount of justifiable, in-character angst. "The layers of his own mind had betrayed him. He wanted to feel her touch, wanted to roll belly-up on the ground, keen like a cub come home, and forget he'd ever been anything else." This is possibly my favorite line ever. I hope you incorporate this element into more stories. ^_^ |
| voce 2007-11-29 ch 51, | abusestory was alright, but it came out too much like a journal and not really like a story, therefore it was at times very hard to follow as the author's thought process was not fully disclosed |
| KataangNutyBabe 2007-11-24 ch 51, | abuse0.0 Okay then. "It smelled like food damnit!" |
| KataangNutyBabe 2007-11-24 ch 50, | abuse*eyes grow wide* Okay, THAT was an AWESOME story. Character development, a good storyline, humor, fluffy moments, some demon slaying, lots of (understandable) bad language and (of course) Inuyasha's ears. You have no idea how many times I broke the tenth commandment when I was reading this. |
| KataangNutyBabe 2007-11-24 ch 45, | abuseWha?! Miroku is gonna turn out like Mushin?! Screwy. Go visit him soon, houshi-sama. |
| KataangNutyBabe 2007-11-24 ch 17, | abuseThis is getting better and better. Thou hast a real talent for humor and writing. |
| KataangNutyBabe 2007-11-24 ch 9, | abusePoor Kurama. And YOU, Inuyasha *Inuyasha flinches at scary voice* stop acting so macho. You like her damnit and she likes you back so stop being such an **! These views and opinions are not nescessarily those against the story or author in question |