Wow, I have always loved your long Fics and thought i'd check out your ff profile for any short ones. I'm so very glad I did! This is one of the best post-Chosen fics I've read. Instead of showing one big happy family, you portryed what real life would do to the scoobies. It was poignant and superbly written. As always keep writing!

I abolutley loved it. Great work.

Thats really nice, well done!

Mel x

wow your stories always find a way to captivate me in ways no other author has are amazingly talented and know how to use the character's role and put them in a story. very well done and keep up the good work.

Aww, that's so sweet. I love the idea of having Xander and Dawn together.

Oh, I liked that.

Wow, you have done the impossible - made me like Dawn! I love the tone of this story, it sounds a lot like what she would write and how she'd think. And I love what she says about Buffy and Spike, especially that at the end...wonderful story, as are all of yours. Looking forward to future stories/parts from you!

That was nice. I like the angsty with a sweet ending. too bad it was so small... you could have ahd a whole big fic just surrounding that idea. nice work. :)

that was beautifully written I really loved it. I find the part wherein everyone drifts apart somewhat saddening (if there ever is such word) yet it still stays close to the reality of life... uh... that was deep and I don't think I could explain that part to you.

I love your story, although it's only a one-shot fic. I cold picture Dawn writing in her diary etc and the ending left me misty eyed... great job

OMG that was brilliant i hope your going to do a sequel because gotta tell you that had me almost crying my heart out...almost...but how did she get spike back?

aw...that was so sweet! The last bit about Spike calling her was so nice! This is awesome!

I REALLY hate Dawn (whiny, useless brat). BUT your story was wonderfully and beautifully written. It almost made me change my opinion about her...almost ;)

Happy ending for everyone. Lovely work

OMG that wiz sum story exactly wot i wanna happen except i want Faith to live! Thanku!

Awesome. I wish the show would go like this and pick up in the future. Great job here and I really enjoyed it.

skyz

oh! that was so good! I loved it! I wish that this would happen on the show, but who knows what's going to happen. I really like your version of it! Good job