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dwelian
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
Just read this and the two sequels. Thank you for making me laugh myself silly!
Peekablue1981
2009-01-26 . chapter 1
Great story, laugh-out-loud funny! The characters, dialogue, & inner-thoughts were pretty much spot-on. Good work! I'm looking forward to reading more.
Darkwinter999
2008-12-31 . chapter 1
YOu are missing a lot of necessary commas, but aside from that, this is hilarious! I loved the 'Well, well.' exchange. You took it past funny, all the way to annoyingly cheesy, then brought it right back to funny. That was great.
And then you went serious. O. M. G. It got serious and made sense and was comePLETELY IC.
I love all the friction you showed throughout this fic; it was placed evenly and showed the love/hate relationship Clark and Bruce share beautifully. Great work.
Ilshmafo! You have no idea how loud and hard I laughed when I read that email from Clark! Oh God! No fic has ever made me laugh that hard EVER!
You rule.
Lol, Bruces second email was good too. Actually, I thought it was Flash until I saw the sign. That made it so much funnier. Truly, Wayne is the secret identity and Batman is his true self (well, as close as he ever gets to one).
Okay, I have to admit that the WW/HG moments were incredibly funny, but Batman is known for his reserve. Whatever your intent there, he is OOC for laughing. As Bruce he might allow himself a chuckle, but never in the cowl.
//Flash and Diana turned to see Batman had, as usual, appeared out of (seemingly) nowhere.//
That killed it. It would have been a great line, but you had to be accurate and add 'seemingly' in there.
The WW journal entry needs another once over for characterization issues. I know you aren't looking to keep her IC, but at least keep her stable. Also, you seemed to be missing a few words in there.
Lol, which one is the real Bruce? The answer is NEITHER! They were both acts with meansured amounts of truth in them. The only question is which act would he keep up for her?
Yes, this fic was funny. Awesomely funny, and I will be suggesting this to all JLA fans I meet. Great work. ;D
Sapphiire
2008-12-11 . chapter 1
Intelligent and interesting. Perhaps a little more action to keep the story flowing. I liked the humor in it-keep it up!
2lazy2login
2008-11-10 . chapter 1
lol good story I love all the emails! ^^
CradleToGrave
2008-11-04 . chapter 1
Actually, that was hilarious. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Good job.
Batgirl293
2008-07-01 . chapter 1
OMG awesome story!! i laughed so hard my eyes started watering! i read the first 3 parts, and i hope there will be more that is just as hilarious! also a great story! :D do you have any recommendations for authors with your style of writing?
sweetmidnight
2005-08-15 . chapter 1
I must say, I have never read a one-shot that contained so much! Bonus points for the story actually being pretty good. Can't talk now, gonna go read, "Ladies Night!"
DreamsFire
2005-03-05 . chapter 1
Wow, your fanfiction was highly amusing.It had me laughing very hard.The fact that it is just about mundane stuff is (inmy opinion)what makes the fanfiction so highly amusing!Just letting you know how much i enjoyed it!
Flatlander Jr
2005-01-09 . chapter 1
I knew the minute Batman started giving Clark pronunciation lessons that this would be an enjoyable, funny fic, and I was right. It was a great story and kept me laughing all the way through. I loved the mall scenes the most :).
Knight's Shadow
2004-05-21 . chapter 1
Loved it.Please update soon.
Emma
2004-01-12 . chapter 1
This was absolutely hilarious. I *loved* it.
hilarious
2003-12-03 . chapter 1
Dude, this is the most messed up fic. It's hilarious though. Good stuff. Keep it going
silverbluehues
2003-11-30 . chapter 1
THAT WAS AWESOME.
CRose
2003-11-28 . chapter 1
Very, very good story!
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