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| NYDreamer 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abusethat was so beautiful. wonderful story. made me cry. -Dreamerxx |
| SecondSilk 2005-07-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is one of my all time favourite stories, and I'm shocked and appalled at myself that it has taken me so long to review it. The first line is gorgeous, and I love the way the story turns around in itself, with the start in the middle. The moment itself is beautiful image, with the torn flyer and no moon. The moon imagery at the end tied everything together nicely. Josh's fear and Sam dealing with him, the bud of their argument, the way they talk around the topic, and fail to do so; all so them, and moving. Josh's self destruction |
| Bisera 2003-09-05 ch 1, | abusewell i rad the rest of ur stories so im just gonna review on this one for all the others...im usually not into slash but ur work had made me appreciate all kinds of writing i relly think ur stuff is great hopefully you'll write more soon |
| Plato's Tragedy 2003-06-20 ch 1, | abuseOk, so this is like the best fic i've ever read! I actually teared up, and i stayed up to read this! I seriously couldn't stop. And because now i feel like a totally horrible writer, i have a tiny little crique. I think Joanie was 12 when she died. That's it! It's wonderful! |
| Rumidha 2003-05-03 ch 1, | abuseHey, i just wanted you to know that no one is going to try and read a block of text that long. You might want to try formatting it, paragraphs, individual sentences, etc. etc. |