Woah.. I'm too sppechless!

It was awesome, and yet so horribly sad.

Holy ball that was fucking sweet!
Great job I loved it all the way I hope yuou write more like this!
totaly loved it all,
maybe you should do something like a short oneshot thing with Zack going through and looking for Cloud, that would be cool to!
-AngelD

This fic is so seriously crazy, dude. Even upon a second reading, it still gets me. XD

O.O OMG... omg... AW! I LOVED IT, IN A SICK ,ADISTIC SORTA WAY... T.T haha, but it was good. sad, mean, but good. ^.^

Wow, I am just... just wow. The abrupt change in Zack's behaviour threw me for a major loop. The last sentence made it even more angstful, as it doesn't say which throat the knife slits. x3 Beautiful work.

Don't say I never review!
*points down to his stupid review from long long ago*
Yeah hi WATCH ME ADD YOU TO MY FAVORITE AUTHORS LIST NOW *shuts up*

::blink:: Court.. No bastard children for you. You killed Cloud! Bad~
xD But hot and kinkai all the same~ Very climatic.

So after re-reading at this point in my life, I must re-review: That's kick ass. Zack is like, ubersexy because I think that vampire-type (yes, I realize no vampire in this, but blood + sex = vampire-like) is sexy...Well done Court, WELL DONE! ::Clap::

I am finally reviewing... HA. :D

Anyway, you already know what I think of it... very, very GOD. :D Reminds me kinda of my vampire fic... kinda... the whole twisted, dark thing plus the blood... yeah. ^^;;

Ebulz Zack seems sexy in a disturbing way. XD

:P

well, court...i'm reviewing.

it's cool and dark and...yeah. very good.

BWEE!

Wow, Court! That was . . . Really really good. The speech made by Zack at the end was awesome, the end was awesome, the characterzation/madness of Zack was awesome . . . Gyah! GREAT job *.* I can find nothing wrong with it.

WTF @ THAT ENDING?!?!? O_O OMFG. He coudn't just wake up and have it a happyyness dream you gotta go kill leh ZACK!? X_O!? o.o;..
Nice first Cloud..and Cloud angst though. o.o;

Go Court. XD

Court, that was AMAZING. I love how it twists around from Cloud wanting Zack there and dreaming of how things could be, and all of a sudden he is there, wanting revenge. The kiss kidna grossed me out (since I'm a guy. ::shudder::), but the last sentece, "And then he slit his throat" was AWESOME. Me love. Five stars. :D

- Oniichan

My gods, Courtness. That just sent chills down my spine. A very nice short story.

m I said it once before: this was great.

ehh what else can I really say? it was really really good. especially the ending, and the lyrics you stuck in there to compliment it.

It was just really well written overall is what I'm trying to say, I guess. n_n;