This one was great also. Poor Lexia.

Oh! *waits anxiously for Quantum Chaos*

Ohh, nice!

Can't wait for the last loose ends to be tied up - and what a great setup for more!

Get writing! NOW!

Very interesting ending, if a little confusing-purposely. Don't want to wait for the continuation, but I guess I'll have to.

I hope we'll find out what happened to James. I really liked him. Also like JJ, and all the kids, and want to see more of them and of course Eric, Wes, and Jen.

Big changes of mood, Lexia's confrontation, the de-pantsing (very funny) and the attack at the end. Again an effective combination of action, humor, and drama.

*grins* I love John's boxers. Actually, I'm amused by the whole maze thing. :-D Oh, suspense! I can't wait to see what happens!

Gr.

Hear the squeaking of hinges? That's my SIC being opened. How DARE you leave it like this? No fair! I want more, and I want it NOW!

Oh come on now, you can't leave it like that

Curiouser and curiouser. (Couldn't resist.)

I really like the way you have managed to combine humor, suspense, fantasy, and imagination here, not to mention weaving together all the different lines of action.

Have to wait a whole week for more - *sigh*.

OOh. . .can't wait to see what happens to the kids! *eagerly awaits the next chapter*

*giggle* Cute. I like the way you're miing humor with a real sense of danger - and I can't WAIT to see how Eric might react to the maze. Pretty please?

Oh...

Heehee. I'm simply loving this! Great stuff. More, please?

This story keeps getting more and more interesting. I'm loving the strangeness of the maze. :-D Can't wait to see what happens next.

Wow, what a great combination of action and humor. Loved James, in particular, he and JJ make a great team.

Very good chapter, the mystery deepens and good job of keeping track of multiple characters and storylines without being confusing.

Till next week...