interesting ending...

More i'm still confused as to how John ended up in the PINK world. _

Oh, love it! Great story, and want more! Pretty please? I'm sick, it's my b-day on the 10th ... just for me? Pweaaze?

Interesting bad guys, and lots of interesting fights. Liked the exchange between Eric and Gina, too.

The Mirrorcon ep was one of my favorites - nice to see reference to it. And still liking the 'wonderland' sort of atmosphere that John is in now. Also nice to see Wes back in action.

Me LIKES!

Love it, in fact ... and me want MORE! NOW!

Well, the girls have gotten more action than they probably wanted. I really like the 'through the looking-glass' world, love the whole fantasy aspect.

Nice treatment of the kids, who are still not adults emotionally.

Can't wait to find out how Shawn knows so much, too.

A Pink World...hahahahaha.. don't make me laugh! Other than that it's all good! Poor John, it not easy being compared to Daddy dear!

Very, very nice, if short. But you -did- warn about that, so I guess you're forgiven. For now. : )

Want more!

This one was good.

Poor John...was already fallen a sleep by the time Ben's class came around.

Yah, give more of this

Man, just when you thought school was tough! I feel extreme pity for the Vengeance Rangers. Your descriptions of the training sessions have gone incredibly well, and it's nice to see how everyone's attitudes towards these changes are developing. This definitely makes one wonder about what else you have planned for them...

Nice. I hope and trust the kids - and we - will see more action than traffic patrol.

Heehee.

PERFECT!

Speaking both as mother of a teenager, writer and devoted fan of yours. Absolutely great stuff. Want MORE!

As always, I totally love your stuff. Can't wait to see how this develops.

this is cool...loved Eric's uneassness...And Alice's idea.

Oh, love this! Heehee.

Especially as a parent of a too-smartalecky-for-his-own-good teenager.

Very well done. More soon, please?

Oh...another chapter of the legend begins! I absolutely adore the way you're expanding the Time Force universe, and I can't wait to see future chapters!