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Good fanfiction ;] i really liked the end 8/10

i loved this story so much. i dont know whether you have already written a sequel or not. if you have then email me back, all you need to do is reply. or find my email adress on my name. please update soon. i have one request. if you have no intention of continuing this story or would just like my idea, would you give me permission to continue this story? i have quiet a few ideas that i think would make you proud. but i wont do it unless you give me permission first. and i would mention you and give you the credit. please let me know. i could even write it first, send it you and then you could make your mind up. please let me know soon.

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Draguna

this is a neat freeza fic, but u kno, im only on chapter 2, so back to reading i am!

I absolutely love your story! It deals with the troubles that vaginas go through in there every day lives. Vagina's past is simply remarkable. And how vagina falls in love with the kid at school named penis! Oh, how romantic!

I have a hard time beleiving that "Sophia" is a sayan name. there's an "E" in route. You spelled it "rout". good story, btw.

Great plot but I can see problems though, you think how I write before I finalise a draft. You have gaps and should elborate more on those gaps. You have great potential you just need to harness it. You could look at it in my writing I have two stories posted on and those all started out on paper. Use your little bursts or inspiration and wirte them down quickly then when you have more time slow down and fill the gaps. Great read and I really enjoyed it, kust to mention it your writing inspired me to start another story to second the first one of a trilogy that I'm writing.

Thanx a bunch, Matrix6241

more please