Mm. A lot of HA are these over-the-top musshy *things*, but this manages quite nicely. Artemis was very much IC, expecially the bit about the book, and Holly pined away without making me want to gag. Good work! The only real thing I can think of is a typo - 'Terra' instead of 'Tara' - and that some of the formatting is a little weird.

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I really like it. It's so sweet, without the characters getting OOC. Hopefully, my story will be like that too, since I'm writing one... and yes, there is a new book coming out, and it's called the Opal Deception, for anyone that cares to read reviews. Please review my story too, although mine isn't as good as yours.

...So sweet...

...So sweet...

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This is really great and so IC. I really liked the part "She had faith in him." It gave great closure to this.
I have to agree with you about the third book ending. Are you sure another AF book is coming? I hope so! I'm anxious to see what happens now that he's been mindwiped.
This really was breath-taking. Bye! ^__^

This was so great, your writing style flows really nicely, i can't wait for more!

I really liked this story. It's not quite in Colfer's style, but you've kept everyone in character. Its sweet without getting sappy, the only thing I disliked was the length, too short! Your style is nice to read so I was a bit disappointed to reach the end. And I like your choice of song too :) Thanks for the story!

i liked it. is there really gonna be another book? that would be great...

Wow great story...i think it was completly lost on me however cause i haven't read eternity code yet... where do you live and when did it come out?

I do like it, I really do.

This is so good! I loved/hated the ending too, but at least there'll be one more. Great story

you need to continue this. it is everything that the eternity code left out. I love it

I agree with Staci- TEC's ending was terrible. I love your fic, though, very angsty and sweet ^_^ plz continue it!

yay! very cool. this is the 2nd time i have read this, and it makes more sense now. that's probably because i just finished reading The Eternity Code, and the first time had hadn't even started. great story!

I hated the ending w/ his diary entry all the evolving he did as a person down the drain... If I could i'd take all his entrys and force them in Roots face so he could see what he did what happens if he figures it out w/ out Mulch he will be as bad as he was at the begining of the first book. Are you shure the new book is about Artemis Fowl? All myv b ook said was by the same author i've had my book for lees then 24 hrs and Im obseesing..

I PRE-ORDERED THE THIRD BOOK AND IT HASN'T CAME YET! SOMEONE AT CHAPTERS MUST DIE! Yes, I am very, very ** right now.

On a lighter note, i love the story. Everyone was IC, even Julius. I find him both hard and easy to portray. I hold a faith (faith, he he) in him that he's not just a red-faced ape.
Well, this weekend wasn't a total loss. I won third place at an art show.

Artemis: Nobody care.

Tie: I do! *curls into a ball*

This is an amazing story!