Sexual abuse is all good and fun as long as you love each other! Let's forget personal dignity!

Ooooooooookay... Short, but OK.

um.. dude.. date rape?.. what were you on...?

i think it could have been better...but other than that..I love Enso and Andreia stories..

Short and sweet!

Umm... that was interesting but the plot didn't exactly add up. like he tried to rape her and she was like no. And then he is remorsefull so he finds her and is like I love you and she is like Never leave me? OOOKKKK. Yeah someone tries to rape me and after one apology he is frogiven forever?

sure

It was pretty good. Different from others I've read, and I kinda liked it. But it'd be better if it were in separate paragraphs.

very nice

It's by far not bad. That's not exactly how I'd imagined them finding each other, or their love for each other, but it could happen. The lack of formatting (tabs and paragraph separations) kind of sucks, but it's livable. It's short, is why. If there was an entire 40 kb fic formatted like this I'd get sick. It's quite nice though, you can tell you were tired writing it.

It was a good story. I mean it was REALLY good. I just wish it was more than a paragraph!

Cool Story!I'm a Matrix and AndrAIa fanatic.Are you?

Very short...the plot needs work this looks like a commercial.. I think there needs to be a little more plot in this story. Also try to put yourself in AndrAIa's place here, would she have forgiven him so easily if this actually happened? I don't think she would..just my opinion...