Okay, I actually kind of liked this story...at first. Now it's getting kind of annoying with the constant exclamation points after every sentance. I get you want your readers to see that it's urgent but you can still do that with just a period. It's annoying to see "blahblah!" "blahblahblah!" "blahblahblahblah!"

This story would be much better if you just stopped doing that.

what are you retarded, you suck, give it up

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

i love it plz continue!

u gotta update soon

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

i totally love it...i really want to read more please update soon...jan 5th in tomorrow i can't wait

i love your story and i was so glad when you realised that you had updated may be you could update again some time soon like before easter! i would gladly appresatete it

love the story so far please update soon

*lol* at the revelation of who they were. I guess they're going to fall in love in the end. I loved the plot and everything, please update soon!

I liked your story very much. Can you update it very soon, because i must know what happens with Serenity(usagi) and Endymion (mamrou) next.

continue soon plz

WRITE MORE REALLY I HAB TO READ MORE~~!

hey! i love your story! please write your next chappie very soon!