CUTE...CUTE...CUTE!

RATING 10!

WHO good stuff chickie. I read "For Rin" before this one. I love them both. Good start for the sqeaul also.

its very sad and all now im about to read For Rin

DANG! ur such a good writer!! WHOA!? this story was soo AWESOME! but NO LEMON :( haha sorry imam LEMON FAN haha well i LOVE fics about Seshy and RIn soo KEEP ON WRITING! lolz

This one was very different than your other ficks. I'm not saying it was bad or anything, it was just written differently that your others. I still liked it though.

not a flame ^_^! Verona

aw. how sweet. too bad asami had to die. awsome story. and dont worry about reviews. my story only has 4-two from the same person, one from someone else, and one from me. *wah!*

This fic was kinda corny. It was like a blind-date game show with destany (if that makes sence)
only with illusions, deception, and action. It was interesting though and hell, I read it so it was good, maybe better... Anyway,YAY for you!

Wonderful story! I can't imagine why it didn't get a bunch of reviews. My guess is because of the original character. That might have thrown people off. I loved it though and now I'm off to go read the sequel! Wonderful job!

I LOVE THIS FIC! IT'S SUPERB!

Wow...this story was so cool! I thought the little thing with Asami and Yaida was a bit confusing...and so did the big demon guy actually exist, or was he part of the illusion? I got lost at about that part, but it sure leads into a new twist on Rin and Sesshomaru...hmm. Can't wait to read what's next!

that was a cute fic,i wasn't that confused ,it was a good story and i'm off to read the sequel

Deanna

good i like
Deanna/Angel

ok. that was AWESOME!
I have spent the past two days reading your story, and I LOVED IT!
I think you've really gotten Sesshomaru's character PERFECTLY.
A lot of people who try to portray him in their fics make him way OOC>.<
So anyway, I LOVE your fic, and I'm going to read your R/S sequal next^^
Ja ne!

this is a good fc, and this review is a reminder for me to finish reading this later

wow.. like it alot, thought ide read this before i read the sequal, no regrets