that was a great story! you need to do another chapter... it was really good and all... yeah.. ok ^-^ keep writing!

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This is a good story please continue!!

i just wnated to say to all of you who read the reviews that i have been away for some time now and only just got back. i WILL update VERY soon. 3 more chappys are in the works.

Please continue this fic.plus i would like to read Goku's reaction when Vegeta starts to plesure him.So naive that so much plesure would make him want more.Hahahahahahaha.ok im gonna stop ranting now but please continue.

^-^ well here's my review... and i like it.. what do your muses eat?... Mine eat Saiyans... or nameks...heheh...AAHH HAA DANCE VEGGIE DANCE!

I love The Saiyan love language... can't understand it until they're kissin or somthing ^-^

I happen to like it. I wonder what will be Yamcha and Bulma's response when they find out.

I could imagine Krillen's reaction. poor guy the shock alone could give him a heart attack.

write chapter 4 soon! Please update & chapters soon!

this is mest up i did not even finsh two chapters be for i got sick i hurled six times this is sick, sick, and sicker plese do not finsh this. i would like to see you strong up like a dead chicken and blown away with m16 asoltriffels

Hm...a sleeping disorder? Think I may have to try that one myself...hahahahaha!

So, what's been up with Vegeta lately...not eating at home and only coming home to sleep...something is amiss...what could it be?

Hope to read more soon...


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make it a trunks/goten!! PLEASE!
well keep going, can't wait.

This is an okay story. I was a little confused at first I mean you didn't say Goku, and Vegeta were gay in this fic so that came as quite a surprise, but other than that it is good.

BWAHAHAHAH oh man i hate it when he does that! You wake up and BOOM he's there... i mean it's fun and all.. but fter a while.. he get's death threats.. lol

I think Vegeta's character was fine, I mean, we all know he has a soft side. Perhaps you could write a chapter about how he got that disorder, you know, maybe he had something bad happen and got left all alone one night while he was asleep or...I'm gonna stop my crazy babbling now. Cool story!