Reviews for A Party with the Old FlyBoys

Reviews for: A Party with the Old FlyBoys
starryeyes12 7/31/09 . chapter 1 great story
laura carr 12/8/07 . chapter 1 great story.
starryeyes10 2/10/07 . chapter 1 great story.
Suzotchka 1/22/03 . chapter 1 I love this. Please write a sequel. Pretty Please with a cherry on top?
jennifer 4/10/01 . chapter 1 i sooo loved that. grin )
Cat 12/29/00 . chapter 1 This would have been a really good story but for one big thing: you had waaaaay too many run-on sentences, which made this story hard to read. Other than that and a few grammatical errors (and we ALL have those), this was pretty good.
bj barnett 12/14/00 . chapter 1 good story-should have a sequel -has interesting possabilities-hope the writers of the show read these and pay attention to the ideas
Tan 12/11/00 . chapter 1 Great! Sequel Please!
Mag 12/10/00 . chapter 1 Please write a sequel. I would love to know what happens next in your story.
CarlyGrl 12/9/00 . chapter 1 Nice job! I love Shania Twain's music too!
janet84 12/7/00 . chapter 1 Some of the phrasing was a bit clichéd, and "All the men in the place began to yell and scream for joy when they began to dance," sounded weird. Other than that, not bad. :) Watch the grammar and diction though. Please read and review my works! :)
Donna Lynn 12/7/00 . chapter 1 I hope everyone liked my story. I finished writing this at 2:30 in the morning so bare with me. If you have any comments please feel free to put them in the review.