i'm crying now
that was beautiful
and so sad

that was stunning my dear, simply stunning you almost had me crying that was wonderful.

Hi!! I Loved your story! and I totally agree with you, Wendy and Peter make the cutest couple, and I'm very disappointed that Disney didn't think so... I dunno if you wanna continue this seeing as you haven't touched it in 2 years lol but for what it's worth, I think you should =)

let me just say that you are a pure genius! i practically cried! listening to "yellow" by coldplay wasn't such a good thing b/c it caused me to tear up while reading your fanfic. it was pure brilliance! tear-jerker...

wow! that was AMAZING!! you MUST continue...or else!

That was beautiful.
It was in-character, full of imagery, and had lots of thought put into it.
Please continiue writing. This piece really moved me.
-Aliquis

you'll continue eventually right? please continue!

aww... you made me cry... *sniff sniff* it's so, so beautiful...

Wow...it was so nicely written that tears actually came to my eyes. Peter/Wendy pairings are the best. Please consider continuing^^

aww that was so so so sweet. are you planning on adding more to it? or maybe a sequel? im sorry i just enjoyed this story so much! i dont want it to end!

That was so beautiful; I wish they would have put Wendy and Peter's relationship into more detail in both of the movies... Now that I've read this, I feel better. I understand their feelings a bit more. I really think that you should continue this, it's spectactular. You're writing is so well done. It was perfect the way you described their emotions in the story. Well done! You're a great writer.

wow that was really nice! i like peter and wendy pairings the best. you wrote really nice...are you thinking of continuing?

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Oh wow, this is so good. I haven't seen the Peter Pan sequel, but what you've done is so wonderful. I hope you write more, and somehow, if you're going to make them stay together, make one of them younger or older so it's not...yeah. Great job!

Very beautiful. Love it! ^_^ Will there be more?

Aw. That was beautiful. Your writing skills are very good and the way you portrayed the characters was wonderful. I agree that Peter and Wendy should be together, though I thought that since the first movie. *sigh* I'd love to see another chapter of this too. It's really good. BTW If you go to Universal Studio's movie website they have a trailer for they're movie take on Peter Pan. It looks awsome and I think it focuses on Peter and Wendy's relationship a bit more. ^^