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Haunt of twilight
2005-07-12
ch 2,
abusethis is interesting. do you plan to make harry dark or draco good? i look forward to your next update.
zafaran
2005-04-14
ch 2,
abuseOh, nice start. I hope you get a chance to continue with this story. Keep up the good work. Zafaran
shazia Born confused
2005-01-05
ch 2,
abusethis is really good
i can't w8 to c wot happens next
update soon!
k, take care
:)
honeyduck
2004-03-28
ch 2,
abusewow i like it! update soon please?
Felicity Gemfiar
2003-12-08
ch 1,
abuseCappie--
I've been waiting for months for an update on this. I love this story. The beginning has so much potential and I love this new plot form. I haven't seen anything quite like it, and I read a lot of fanfics. (I realize it might just be my selection, but humor me). I hope you haven't become discouraged, and aren't writing any more to the story. It honestly is great. Please, please, I beg of you, to add in another chapter, if even to finish the story off where you kill everyone. I know how cheesy begging is, but that's all a reader can do. As we have no other contact, I can't threaten you with annoying phone calls or something to that effect. (I hope you know that I'm joking... heh *__*) Anyway, this is a fabulous piece of work and I hope you continue with it soon.
--Felicity
juggling stars
2003-11-29
ch 2,
abusethis is really good but i feel so sorry for harry!
Jedi-Bant
2003-11-28
ch 2,
abuseThis is a good fic plz update soon.
Twisted2SingAlong
2003-07-17
ch 1,
abuseO.o good chapter- you kept Draco in character so well! GOLDEN STARS TO YOU! *bows*
Anata-chan
2003-07-04
ch 2,
abuseWow. That was just...wow!
This pairing has always fascinated me, and I'm glad that I could find another well-written one! This is absolutely fabulous; the details and emotions of frustration and confusion are extremely believable! I can't wait for more!!
Would it be possible to email me when you update? I'd be ever so greatful!
~Anata
Liliku
2003-06-29
ch 2, anon.
abuseJust thought I'd let you know, which I bet many others have but, you can not apparate inside Hogwarts. Even if it is within Hogwarts. No apparating, sorry. Like the story though. Keep it going.
NayNymic
2003-06-29
ch 2,
abuseGreat chapter! Like the way you made Harry bitter. :) Two things, though. One: Bring on the slash as soon as possible! =D And two: It's impossible to either apparate or disapparate anywhere on the Hogwarts grounds. Hermione mentions it repeatedly. Apparently it's in "Hogwarts: A History." :p Update soon!

NayNymic
forbiddenmao
2003-06-29
ch 2,
abuseinteresting piece of work. i love how you wrote about draco's internal struggle and the way you described harry. he isn't perfect and it makes him all the more real. please write more.
kaylyn
2003-06-29
ch 2, anon.
abusehehe. that was so good. Please update soon!
the cultural dictionary of ...
2003-06-29
ch 2, anon.
abusewai! wai! I can feel h/d budding!! good job!
ddtrunks77
2003-05-22
ch 1,
abuseThis is good...very good.Update!Update!Update!...Oh and Update soon too.
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