Are you ever going to update this is good?

interesting! I look forward to more.

more please

Please update! please please please! I love it! If you don't update I'll cry

Very interesting idea you have here. Please continue this story and soon. I am glad there are stories like this that are creative.

Awesome fic! Please please please continue soon!

OH! This is getting really exciting! This Shane dude knew Qui-Gon...hm...UPDATE SOON! I'm lovin' it! The bit when Obi is convincing the bounty hunter is very good. So what's with this bounty hunter dude?!?! Hope to see the next part up soon! :)

Great Part. Man I can't wait to see Obi-Wan as a bounty hunter. Update sooner, PLEASE!

OOh . . . my sistuh! I liked this part!

You used big words and managed to make it flawless. OOh, I like, I like. And you made it so simple, not like when you told me. I understood. Wicked twist. Of course, I know what's gonna happen . . . but newayz, I liked it. You conveyed it good.

I am humbled.

Jerikor

looking great!

Love it, can't wait for more.

Hope that you update soon. I'm really enjoying this fic. Love the bit when poor Obi had to cut his braid. Update soon! :)

Oh wow, how cool! Inititally I was just going to browse through this fic, so I started from Ch. 2, where Qui-Gon 'cuts' Obi-Wan loose. That pretty much drew me into the fic. Awesome idea and great story. Now, please finish? ^.^

I love this story. It is so good. Keep going.

Hey, this rocks! I think it's a great idea, great plot, and hey, we all wanna see Obi in that bounty hunter wear, right?! ;) I really can't wait to read more, and I love the padawan braid bit. There were a few typos and I agree with Essie Aster, some of the characters jumped to conclusions very quickly. The story is moving very fast, maybe a little too fast, but overall, I loved it! Please hurry with the next chapter!