I really hope you are able to continue with this story. I was playing it as I was reading the story, and it was really funny to read what you had written regarding how Otacon and Snake got to each place.

What a great place to hide a card and ammo

Well at least you're trying to live to keeping this story alive. seems like every multichaptered story is dead and buried

I don't blame snake for being worried about otacon having a heart attack

Ya seeing those soldiers torn up like that was a bit disturbing. I played this game when I was like 8 years old. Nothing something a kid should see.

Awesome boss battle. I agree, it would be more boring if it was just punch, punch, kick

That would seriously piss me off if someone had taken my ability to shoot things

Awesome boss battle. Different then the way you did it in the game

Meryl does sound like a very frustrating girl to get to know.

Seems like every time snake talks to someone they die. it's a shame

Looks like snake got some well welcomed help from a mystery person. Poor ocelot, he didn't deserve to have his hand cut off

Well alright looks like we'll get to see snake face off against ocelot

I wonder if Ocelot did it on purpose or mistake.

Or how the guards knew snake was in that room, he didn't make much noise.

Lol snake is such a perv. But, whatever helps him complete the mission

Impressive fight scene. It's a shame the game wasn't as graphic as you made it

Sounds like psycho mantis took over the DARPA chief to try and get information of snake without him knowing it.

I don't get the point of snake asking master why his foots were echoing. It seemed rather obvious and makes snake look rather stupid if he can't figure it out