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| Obscurus Lupa 2003-06-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseKeisha . . . "The Series" is a story that I wrote. That's why it's capitalized. It has new characters. This has nothing to do with Harry Potter. In The Series, there have been multiple characters with British accents. Hence, "Bloody hell!" There also is a new character with glasses named Tate Foreground. Hence, the glasses breaking. Look around my account. You'll find both Season One and Season Two of my Big Wolf on Campus series there. Read up. I've been told the new characters are bloody interesting. ;) |
| Keisha 2003-06-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was good, thoough I couldn't tell who was talking or what was happening, by the way does this have anything to do with Harry Potter? (example: "My glasses" no one has glasses on Big Wolf On Campus, "bloody hell" no one says bloody hell on big wold on campus, I rest my case) |
| Erin Turnbull 2003-05-11 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, confusing... let's see... At first I thought the rock paper scissors thing at the beginning was Tate and Tommy. But After this part: "Did they even have stuffed-crust pizza back then?" "I'm not that old." "Still, I mean, the UK was pretty behind during the Industrial Revolution." I figured it was probably Friedrich and Merton. "Hey, guys! Let's not fight." At first I thought Lori, but then I thought maybe it was friedrich and Tommy at the beginning so that could be Merton. "Twit." That would have been friedrich, if he was the one at the beginning. "Oh, now you're gonna get it!" That would have been one of the two people who were fighting in the beginning. After that, things got too confusing to keep track of. "Ow! Ow! Ow! My fur!" That was Tommy, wolfed out, so I'm guessing it must have been him and friedrich who were playing rock paper scissors at the beginning. "Not much. I-I mean, I was going to look up spells. Normal s-stuff." That was Alyson. For sure. "Yeah. Many people c-confuse Frankenstein with the m-monster h-he created. The monster d-didn't actually h-have a name." That was Alyson too. I take it they're watching a movie. All the talk about popcorn and chips, and the movie must be frankenstien. "My glasses! No fair!" If I was right about friedrich playing rock paper scissors then that must be him... Hmm... that was interesting. I can say however that throughout your series you've got some really good characters. |