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| AlbinoMonkeyC 2006-06-29 ch 1,  | abuseOMG! That was SO cute! |
| Alex Took 2006-06-17 ch 1, | abuseNice story, I liked it a lot. I love this pairing, I'm not the only one! yay! ;) |
| Sus 2004-07-02 ch 1, | abuseOoh, that was cold Daniel! Lol, thanks for the tips honey, but surely a kiss isn't too much to ask for? x |
| Dan 2004-07-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell structured with a great scene and atmosphere setting. A little re-working of the punctuation in the first half would do wonders though. Also, getting into the latter half, it strikes me how you have tried to imply that these are his thoughts and memories, yet still write as a narrator. Maybe a switch to 1st person would solve this. Altogether a fantastic fic that really portrays the loneliness of nightcrawler tied in with the possible ray of hope he has found with this new life and, hopefully, new love. Well done. |
| Night Shade 2004-06-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseOoh, VERY good. Well done; you have Kurt's quiet, inward-looking character down very well! Keep writing! |
| angelique 2003-12-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey that's pretty good so far. Please write some more soon. Cuz I just love Kurt. Although I really don't care for the pairing of Nightcrawler and Storm. But that's just what I think. Anyway, again great story. Okeetay! Buh Bye :) |
| Ken 2003-09-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseIts brilliant sus, I love this bit 'An insomniac perhaps, or an artist, even a writer looking for inspiration' bravo! |
| Julia 2003-07-05 ch 1, anon. | abusesweet story - or rather: beginning. I'd be thrilled to bits if you continued the story, I`ll be looking for updates. I like the details and the way you catch Kurt's mood, his accepting and religious way. The reminiscenses of his past fit in nicely and were not to oviously "I will now tell you of my past". Plus, congratulations: No grammar mistakes in the title - german quotes in english works often sport them. (No wonder. Nasty language with all the endings) |
| Bringer of Doom 2003-06-19 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. |
| Starknight 2003-05-18 ch 1, | abuseCool, you did a great job of portraying Kurt. Es war spitze! |
| JessiChi (not signed in) 2003-05-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseOhh that was great! |
| Shian 2003-05-17 ch 1, | abuse. . .Hiei says he likes this one, it wasn't too cute for him to despise it. ^_~ Good job, if Hiei liked it, then you *know* I LOVE it! Write more PLEASE! |
| Lisa 2003-05-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseAbsolutely magnificent! And good idea to mention in the summary that the story is in English, since the title is in German. :D |
| Broadwaypoetess 2003-05-10 ch 1, | abuseWhoa. I love you for writing this. You get a cookie. (Love the title, I used a web translator to figure out what it meant though.) |
| Nyx Elfheart 2003-05-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful and inspiring. Feels just like Kurt. I love the attention to detail, like mentioning his tail wrapped around his leg ^_^ Very, very well written. |