This story was amazing!! HOLY S**T! I should swear off writing after reading this, WOW!! Really nice work...REALLY!

this is beautiful. absolutely wonderful job, and quite thought-provoking. the game doesn't delve too much in GF-usage at all, and you did a fine job dealing with it. i really liked the take on Selphie, seeing things from her POV, the intriguing insight into GF's, and the subtle facets of Selphie's personality you managed to include nicely. great job.

Wow. Angsty. I like it veryvery much, though. Nice insight on the GFs. ^_^