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jakenthebest
2008-07-24
ch 28,
abuseaw...that was the cutest ending ever! and it's almost 4:00 am so i gotta go sleep...

this is one of the best stories ever!
jakenthebest
2008-07-24
ch 27,
abuseyay! that was easy...
jakenthebest
2008-07-23
ch 26,
abusei wonder what the last salvation would be...i mean what shippou meant to sat?!?!

maybe they have to ask him something like...'can you bring me happiness' or whatever...well i guess i'll just read the next chapter...and i'm also sad that your story's ending...it's excellent! wahahahahahaha!
jakenthebest
2008-07-23
ch 25,
abuseaw.w...that's sad...

i knew that it was shippou i just didn't write it in my previous comment...the 'sounded like michael jackson' gave it away LOL
jakenthebest
2008-07-23
ch 24,
abusehahahhaa i laughed with the FIrst's phone call...so out of character and that makes it hilarious...
jakenthebest
2008-07-23
ch 23,
abusei love miroku and sango! good thing they're here...
jakenthebest
2008-07-23
ch 21,
abuseyay! naraku died!
jakenthebest
2008-07-23
ch 20,
abuseso naraku became the mom, hojo and inuyasha...i see...i get it...

i just realized, in the anime/manga, naraku stopped using his shape-shifting abilities after what he did to kikyo, inuyasha, and miroku's grandfather...after that he just remained as the war lord's son...the shape-shifting ability is actually harder to defeat! i wonder what they'll do and if it will be a happy ending?!??!?!
jakenthebest
2008-07-23
ch 19,
abusewait wait wait wait...

so did she kiss inuyasha or naraku...wait...what?! hojo is naraku?! or what what what?! my comprehension skills are probably rusty...being out of school for the summer and all...
jakenthebest
2008-07-23
ch 17,
abuseyay inuyasha's being jealous! i also hope he'll turn human sometime...i adore human inu...hehehe
jakenthebest
2008-07-23
ch 15,
abuseah! SUSPENSE AND TRAGEDY! Naraku totally sucks ** like totally...he should be killed sweeney todd style and turned into a human burger and fed to cannibals...whew...
jakenthebest
2008-07-23
ch 14,
abuseis that naraku?!
jakenthebest
2008-07-23
ch 12,
abuseNARAKU!

I love inuyasha's explanation...he must have great patience to say something like that...but then you're the author so i guess YOU'RE the one with the great patience

i love your story really!
jakenthebest
2008-07-23
ch 10,
abusefreaky naraku...well at least kikyo won't go back from the dead...and at least inuyasha is not confused between the two because he knows that they are very different...
jakenthebest
2008-07-23
ch 9,
abusebad move inuyasha...you just created naraku! wahahahahaha *evil laugh* does that mean naraku would take kagome away?!?!??!
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