interesting story... can't wait to read the next one...

Holy **... that was *good*. You suck. I wish I could write that well... they tell me I can but I just don't believe them.
^_^ Me likes mucho. Great job.

Hell yeah, I like!I *can't* believe I didn't review this...I honestly thought I did...Anyhow, I love it...I read Passion, and came back to read this...I like very, very, much!

I really like the story.

OOhh! I remember this! I read it on Zoo-san's website.. ^_^ Prettyful! (Aka. I loved it!)
Good luck!

good yet confusing XD;

[shivers]

You know- oddly- this story sorta gave me the creeps. Not in a bad way, mind you- but you know- when you read a story and at the end you're so impressed it's like... DAMN.

[claps proudly]

Good job, Renee! I'm definetly interested in what the other two parts may offer- so make sure to remind me if I don't see them when they come up, alright?

So yeah- hopefully you win! And hopefully their little group can... "cooperate" with their new innocent...

Okay-

Now I can say safely: I get it.

+Malik wants Yuugi- a hell-a alot... freakishly.

+Yuugi might be the "chosen one" ((oh those words!))

+Yuugi suddenly stumbles in on the group and... what will happen?! [gasps from all around]

[blinks and stares]

Bakura... used him? But like how?

[scratches head]

Well- I can sorta see the gist of what may have happened, but that cult-ish group is still a little odd to me... What do they... DO?

And with what I can only guess is Yuugi ((at this point, anyway))- what's goin' on with him? He seems so depressed! o.o

[stares]

A sudden Malik/Yuugi thought just popped into my head. Is that good?

[eyes her suspiciously]

Are you just asking me to read for review count or does my opinion really matter? -_-.

[snuddenly snickers and laughs]

Just kidding! Don't take that in a bad way or anything- I like your writings and everything makes SENSE! Plus you're original, so who am to judge? ((my stuff is so clique [sniff])). Okay- here goes!:

+It takes skills to write in first person -_-. I ain't so f*ckin' fortunate!

+Everyone for Malik is... virtually dead to him... I dunno- as much as other people may write about how his family is virtually nothing to him ((me included)) it still sorta makes me depressed just reading about it!

+o.o They're like a f*ckin' cult! [stares in shock] I mean- when you brought up the campfire- I immediatly thought of this stupid show that was on Nickelodean when I was like 10 and they told each other "spooky" stories... but then the blood- and then the humming? [stares]

Sorry, I'm too lazy to sign in--I'm heading off to a party so I must be quick! I read this originally off the website and I like the idea, it's very original which is definately a compliment in this category. -_-()It's also a refreshing change that you've used Malik as your base character, he doesn't get a lot of recognition, even I'm guilty, so it's nice to see him get some stories now and then.

Well done and good luck in the contest! ;)

--Amy

Great story! I like it a lot! It's an original idea, and you have the point of view done quite well. I hope you do write the other two someday! I'd like that! I really would!

Always and forever,
~ [the exclaimation happy]Talentless

PS- Good luck on the contest! Your story should blow them away ^_^