Candyland this was a-freakin mazing this is one of the greatest stories ever written you rock :)

DAAAYUMNNN

Ususally I'd criticise Fics like these for being unoriginal. .. but .. you blew me away !

I enjoyed it !

This was oustanding! You displayed the scene perfectly, and your characterization was kept spot on. Definitely one of the best DBZ fics I've come across. Well done.

sora

i love u

Cool i hope you write more

Good oneshot on Videl's thoughts during the tournament. You could have expanded it to the rest of the Buu saga and all the surprises and bonding she shared with Gohan's group at the Lookout, but it was still good.

Wow, this is a very good look into Videl's side of things during the World Tournament- well done, yo! bd

wholly crow! you did that by memory? wow! it was great! thanks so much for posting it all!

Maux

very well done.

Omigosh! I must have more! Give me more! Write a sequel :D please please?

This was a pretty good story, following the plot. You see a lot about what Videl is thinking, which is cool, since, unfortunately, while watching the show you can't do much but just guess. :D

Cute one shot!

awesome. every videl fan needs to read this. though you could have added the afterlife parts.

the dialogue aactually was pretty acurate please write more

Al

This was very good, I had to stay up till 12:37 AM to finish this but I loved it A LOT! IT WAS AWESOME.

I just missed the japanese ending: "Please, survive this, because when you come back, I want to date you and stuff" Isn't this a 100 times more romantic and nice and everything? :-P

Anyway, the whole idea was awesome, the whole writing was awesome, and the whole fic was FUCKING AWESOME!

U do really kick ass with your oneshots!

See ya!

MikoKriszty