|Reviews for Surprises|
| NerdsRule 12/26/12 . chapter 1
Candyland this was a-freakin mazing this is one of the greatest stories ever written you rock :)
| SomeDamn Author 12/13/12 . chapter 1
Ususally I'd criticise Fics like these for being unoriginal. .. but .. you blew me away !
I enjoyed it !
| sheepeater 3/4/12 . chapter 1
This was oustanding! You displayed the scene perfectly, and your characterization was kept spot on. Definitely one of the best DBZ fics I've come across. Well done.
| graceysnit 12/3/11 . chapter 1
i love u
| zatarra 4/14/11 . chapter 1
Cool i hope you write more
| NANLIT 3/30/11 . chapter 1
Good oneshot on Videl's thoughts during the tournament. You could have expanded it to the rest of the Buu saga and all the surprises and bonding she shared with Gohan's group at the Lookout, but it was still good.
| ElricKeyblade 5/2/10 . chapter 1
Wow, this is a very good look into Videl's side of things during the World Tournament- well done, yo! bd
| Esquimaux 7/20/09 . chapter 1
wholly crow! you did that by memory? wow! it was great! thanks so much for posting it all!
| Demonkid 1/29/09 . chapter 1
very well done.
| KageOkami-Kogo 3/1/08 . chapter 1
Omigosh! I must have more! Give me more! Write a sequel :D please please?
| Kitten Kisses 7/3/07 . chapter 1
This was a pretty good story, following the plot. You see a lot about what Videl is thinking, which is cool, since, unfortunately, while watching the show you can't do much but just guess. :D
| Toadzg1 8/27/06 . chapter 1
Cute one shot!
| the grey mage 8/22/06 . chapter 1
awesome. every videl fan needs to read this. though you could have added the afterlife parts.
| Winter Bean 6/20/06 . chapter 1
the dialogue aactually was pretty acurate please write more
| TheRomanticNerd 4/12/06 . chapter 1
This was very good, I had to stay up till 12:37 AM to finish this but I loved it A LOT! IT WAS AWESOME.
I just missed the japanese ending: "Please, survive this, because when you come back, I want to date you and stuff" Isn't this a 100 times more romantic and nice and everything? :-P
Anyway, the whole idea was awesome, the whole writing was awesome, and the whole fic was FUCKING AWESOME!
U do really kick ass with your oneshots!