I like it very nice. A very good describtion of each character.

An interestingly built-up story ; the part-titles add something somehow. The contrast between Aya/Ran and Yohji especially was interesting to note (Their responses to a heavy loss I mean).

no matter how many of these kinds of fics are written about Weiss, i will never ever get tired of them.

anyways, i really do like this!