 StarDuchess 2009-11-10 . chapter 57It's a shame this story hasn't been updated in over 2 years. It's was so close to completion!
I can practically see the final fight scene when Callen gets back control and kills Voldemort then falls to his knees crying in despair at all the people he's killed, but I can't see what will happen after that. Does Callen get arrested? Is there a trial and conviction? Is he given the serum, thus being stripped of all magic? Or does he flee and become a fugitive? Does he heal Ron of his hatred and they make up? Does he stay with Hermione? I can think of half a dozen ways to finish the plot but it would be nice to know how you wanted to end it.
It was a wonderful read. The creature-Harry was a great idea! I thoroughly enjoyed the whole thing. |
 Heksie 2009-10-20 . chapter 57what a cliffhanger - not knowing what going to happen next... |
 jesusfreak100percent 2009-10-15 . chapter 57Please, please, update this story soon! It is quite amazing!! I'm not the greatest fan of Hermione and Harry, but your story is so great I don't care! I want to see what happens... would I be right in guessing Lizzy - as Harry's "soulmate" (I'm guessing you don't follow soulmates needing to be a boy/girl... or how would you put it... in a more... loving relationship) - might stop him? That's my wild guess. Please update it soon! Write on! |
 Puritey 2009-10-03 . chapter 57Ack, I hope you finish the story... |
 snapeangel 2009-10-02 . chapter 11u go remus :D |
 dontcallmemadeline 2009-09-18 . chapter 57NO! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! please update, this is going so well! Although, i must admit i never would have guessed that this would be a creature-fic (well, sort of) from the summary... that was a big surprise. UPDATE!! |
 dontcallmemadeline 2009-09-18 . chapter 30Isn't Professor Sprout's first name Pomona?... (i'll review properly once i'm finished reading) |
 tobystephensfan 2009-09-06 . chapter 57Omg! I am soo loving this story! I can't believe that the last update was 2 years ago! Please continue this story, it's fantastic and has a great story line! I want to know what happens in the end. Please update very soon!! |
 WolfbainKohaku 2009-09-03 . chapter 57Damn. Why haven't you updated in so long? Did you give up on the story or something? It's really interesting, a lot better than the other Super Harry stories, where he automatically has all of his powers and has complete control of them and stuff like that. So much better. =] Anyway, please get back to the story. Thanks, -WK |
 WolfbainKohaku 2009-09-03 . chapter 40Hey, I thought that I'd point this out, I noticed that you included Luna Lovegood in the NEWT Potions class. It was a little odd, seeing as she's a fifth year student, and haven't even taken her OWLS yet. I know it was probably a mistake, but it might be best to edit that part a little, due to the fact that she isn't a sixth year and all that other good stuff. I like the story by the way. =] |
 jemovampiress 2009-08-09 . chapter 57This is really good! Update soon ok? |
 Cassandra30 2009-08-05 . chapter 6Poor Lily. Poor Severus. Poor Harry. |
 Cassandra30 2009-08-05 . chapter 5Well they it is. Forgiven. |
 Cassandra30 2009-08-04 . chapter 4Severus is Harry's father? |
 Cassandra30 2009-08-04 . chapter 3Excellent! That should bring down those wards! |