You ended it perfectly.

AW! *squeals* Thats so cute! But I don't like how all of a sudden Ryou's father is okay again...¬¬. But other than that, GREAT!! ^o^

OMGOSH! GAH! Stupid Bakura...*grumbles* shouldn't leave Ryou. Ah well...gonna read the rest...

Wai! Wai! I luffles this ficcie! ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^

My only complaint is that it was hard for my poor lil' eyes to read since it was all one big paragraph... X.x

No biggie though! ^^

Anou...anyways...this was a great fic! I give it two thumbs up! ^o^

i really like your story...demo...i just wish you could reformat your story to make it easier to read...

Very good story! And I'm glad it had a happy ending ^_^

Good story. You're doing a great job with the interactions.

I think you should continue... ^__^

Its a great fic, nice emotion n' you charecterize everyone good. The only problem I saw was that...since you don't use paragraphes or seperate the sentances when someone begins to speak it was hard to read...