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| NYDreamer 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abusebest story ever. |
| Telgar 2005-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI love it! so cute, and funny at the right moments too. I love your style of writting ^.^ |
| RememberMeWell 2004-12-24 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. |
| leonsalanna 2004-08-03 ch 1, | abuseOh...my...god...That was one of the most lovely, most moving stories I have ever read. I am not exaggerating. Sometimes when I read a story so full of power, full of strength, full of desire I get this...pain in my stomach. A good pain, like the mending of a broken bone, but smaller. I definately had that pain here. I cracked up when Josh was explaining to Sam and Toby the circumstances (loved the coffe pot's mother and the communist toaster) but then it got to the part with Sam and Josh. I basically just stared in awe at my computer. I had to have lunch and go out while I was reading it, and I though about this story the whole time. I love this story. |
| ladydewinter1 2003-11-02 ch 1, | abuseThat story is so hot... I held my breath reading it. It's funny, very well written, and just...you know, hot :) |
| Natzlin 2003-06-18 ch 1, | abuseI love you for writing this, it's so kawaii! sequel? |
| Timp 2003-05-07 ch 1, | abuseHey, that's some damn good writing you've got there; a few grammar and spelling things (I like that Sam's writing a speech for the ALF-CIO, like Alf works at a corporation, hee) but your style is quite refreshing - descriptive without pedantism, emotion without melodrama. I'd be interested to see more. |
| Rumidha 2003-05-06 ch 1, | abuseYAY!! I liked this one a lot better than 'Keep Looking'. I like humor better than angst. Oh yay, this was an awesome one! Keep up the good work! |