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Lilybet
2008-10-15 . chapter 1
Is it wrong that the deleted scene is the bit that got me laughing even more madly than before?
Very nice. Fights with blankets are far too much fun.
LB
kim
2008-08-09 . chapter 1
I don't think its Potter thats gone mad.
darkfaerie161
2006-11-28 . chapter 1
*blinks* wow that was great... i love the deleted scene too...
whatifisaidno
2006-06-24 . chapter 1
*dies* I loved this when it was DETENTION. You might want to archive it again.
Sabrina451
2004-07-28 . chapter 1
I like the deleted scene the best. **giggles**

~Sabrina
yellow sparks
2003-11-16 . chapter 1
Lol...I loved the deleted scence..that was great, and I love burrito's!! Update! ;-)
evelia
2003-08-19 . chapter 1
After a day of melodrama and angst, this served to make the rest of tonight more than bearable. Thanks, I like you much for that. This story was light-hearted and sweet, and was written with a casual air of classic humor that made it more than worth the time. The deleted scene made me smother a guffaw, and was adorable. Thanks again, it overall rocked.

-evelia

PS: One of my favorite parts? The summary, amazingly. Lured me right in.
Ivy
2003-07-28 . chapter 1
LOL! That was just wonderful! The deleted scene was great also!
Arwen Rayne
2003-06-20 . chapter 1
Luv, that deleted scene was about as cute as a pihranna in the bath tub. Thanks for the rest of it though.
slytherinsela
2003-06-01 . chapter 1
hehehehe... i rather like the deleted scene :)
S
2003-05-23 . chapter 1
*grins and runs aroudn in circles* BURRITO!
MWAAHAHAHA

...he he he...

...erhm yers anyway .. heh this was a cool little fic ^.^
elincia
2003-05-18 . chapter 1
Megumi: Maybe it's because you're a great writer, or maybe it's because I'm sugar high, but that was really funny ^_^. And cute. Let's go with the former, just to make you happy ^_^.
Neph: The deleted scene was PRICELESS. The odd thing is, I can actually picture him doing that. And, of course, picturing DANIEL RADCLIFFE doing it is even more priceless, what with him being so twitchy and bad at acting and all ...
Megumi: We give this four thumbs up! *cheesy Yoh/Sora grin*
B Jean
2003-05-06 . chapter 1
What a fun ficlet! The summary could use a little work though. I read the story sort of by-the-way. But once I got started I was glad I did.
Sylvester
2003-05-06 . chapter 1
*cackles* i love the deleted scene! I'm gonna go around saying that at school now. "Hey, look, I'm a burrito!" ever thought about a sequel...?
mel
2003-05-06 . chapter 1
very funny i laughed my ** off!!
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