no no no no no no no no no no no no no no NO!

i HATE stories where harry and severus become close and then severus loses all his memories (yes, i've read quite a few of them)

sorry, it's not that i don't like this story - it's just the opposite. this is one of my favourite stories and i especially love harry and severus's relationship, and now it's gone!

oh well, im gonna go read the sequel now, and i hope severus gets back his memories really soon

Yikes. I had absolutely no recollection of the fairly bad grammar and sometimes noticeable non-English wording. Just goes to show how totally captivated I was by this fic when I first read it. ;D
And still am. Slights on your English aside, this is still one of the most angsty, exciting, sad, and wonderful fanfics I've read to this day. And I'm looking forward to reading the third part once more, right about ...now. ^^

This one made me cry too, just like the last one. Please help Severus get his memories back in the next fic. Completely and fully, get through the memory charm. Don't just fill Severus in on what happened, help him remember.
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sniff,sniff... my heart is broken, I hate you!! Now, seriously, this one is so very sad, poor Harry/Quietus can't get a break, you even made it worse because Severus doesn't remember his brother, so they can't have at least a half-true saying Harry is his dear brother's son. I don't know how all their lies are going to end but I'm very afraid is not anything good. I'll make a longer review after the last one but I can't wait to read it now. I can't think of a better compliment! Navvy

As promised, i'm reviewing the sequel to your fantastic HDH series...

If the first had a lot of angst, this is much much more tragic. Harry/Quietus now has to face the consequences and effects of their captivity and you went about it all wonderfully. I fell for your "Ares is the traitor" trap bur then i thought of the way authors like o misguide their readers (like me) and immediately went looking for another person. However i must confess i thought it was Janus instead of Leah, but still you got me hooked...

Now about Severus, i always have a forebodding feeling when i read stories like this and i really bauled my eyes out when he Obliviated himself, and Harry/Quietus' reaction afterwards, i applaud his strenght and bravery...

This story should be put in the classics communities here in , if it already is not there...

I absolutely love this series...!



Still the after-effects of your story,
dan4eva

oh man, this story is do adictive! I started reading at 8am and it is now 1.30 and I have not gotten out of bed because I had to finish reading it! Loved the story, so well told, now off to read the next part, after I get up and showered . Thanks!

I knew this was coming...something like this, as soon as that scene, with the old self and the walls and stuff...Well didn't know, but I suspected...I can't believe I was wrong about Ares...it is because Leah wasn't with him so much, wasn't getting close, so I didn't figure it out...And Ares was getting closer to him...so, you see my logic.

His old wand?

I was wrong! It is Leah! Is her brother in on it too?

Is it Ares?

at least Ron realized his mistake...after the fact, but still...

Ares is the spy! ( I relized last chapter, but Remus figuring it out was so exciting! ) am I right?

LOL!! Lupin is smart! He figured it out!

What did Sirius Figure out? That Quiet is Harry? Or something else?

Hah! Finished ... but it's sorta sad! But just as good as the first. :D
I think the girl they're looking for is Anne. I mean, something's gotta happen with her. It's Anne BLACK for god's sake!
Hmm ... can't think of anything else to really say, except that it was sorta a sad ending and now I HAVE to read the next one.