It was so sweet and touching. I loved it.

That is so sad! But well thought up. I like it write more stories like this plz!

I lost interest in SW stories a while back, but I am currently on a run of reviewing almost all your stories...so I thought I would give it a whirl...Very nice. Although I MUCH prefer your Legolas ones...LOL

Beth

well done! I enjoyed this very much.

Very good! Hope to see more of your writing.

Wow! Once I started I couldn't stop. You never lost my attention or made me feel let down. It was superb!

aw bless, good AU way of uniting the two, pity del ray left it so long

this is a well written story (or chapter)! Good Job- There is a book written about this very same subject- i read it too long ago to remember the title - is it connected in any way? Keep on writing! :o)

Oh, that was kinda sad, but it was really really good, very descriptive. Nice backstory for Obi-Wan, and I like the way you portrayed Mace, lol.

I like this story. I love the father/son relationship between Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan.

oohh, that was so good! i loved the story of how Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan came together. good one! is there gonna be more chappies, or a sequel, or sumfin?