I loved this. It was beautiful. I adore the progression in Yuki's thoughts and feelings. I haven't read many stories that deal with Yuki's thoughts about Tohru prior to getting to know her, and I must say yours was beautifully done and very in character. Heartwarming and adorable C:

c'mon get to the part where yuki makes tohru his and kisses her!

yeah... that was REALLY good. I like how it came together, and yet still had a feeling of abstract. This is the kind of writing that makes people want to change themselves. It sounds just like some of the thoughts that Yuki would have. GJ (Oh yeah, and I love that line at the end about rice tasting better with fruit

Aw... that is adorable!

aw! How kawaii!

wow...uncanny how you can write such a great songfic in one day.great job!

that's so sweet!
i love it...please continue?

Aw...*huggles Yuki*

aw!even though i hate south pacific to the bone i loved this fic!

Lovely!
Do you plan to write a sequel? I hope so!

That was so sweet, and everything that you've written seems so in character for Yuki. Nice fic, I'm adding it to my favourite stories list ^^

Absolutely fantastic!
Totally blown away!
Romantic to the core!

Very sweet. Quite IC for Yuki too! Try writing more.
^^