I'd read this one sometime ago, remembered it but stupidly not added it to my favourites. I've been looking for it for a couple of months. I eventually had to ask on maple street for it. I love it. The Jack and Sam flashback is just wow! and Jack got shot *cry*. Really excellent! The only thing that I think could make this story better is a sequel. I want to know what happens next. Truly amazing! A joy to read. Thanks for sharing.

I like the ending. :) I also like how you began the chapter with first Sam's view point and then Jack's. Next we have that wonderful dialogue scene. Great job!

Wonderful ending!! Such an incredibly sweet and touching conversation -- and so well-written. Thank you for leaving us with a feeling of hope. I so enjoyed this story! Keep writing!! :)

What a wonderful ending. In this chapter, I particularly loved your descriptions of Jack and Sam's thoughts on why their relationship would never be over. But I'm sorry to see that this story IS over ;-). Nice job from beginning to end.

Wo! What a fantastic ending. Such wonderful dialogue and the perfect closure to this wonderful story. I always love everything you write, and this was no exception. GREAT job!!

Great, great chapter. Loved the OPR scene especially, but it all rocked. Lots of tension and angst. Can't wait for the next installment!

Another compelling chapter! I particularly loved the OPR interrogation -- the dialogue flowed beautifully. Love the Sam and Danny friendship -- loved the Sam and Van Doren scene at the end. Great job -- keep writing!!

Only one more chapter?? :whine:

I love the hand-holding in the hospital -- I've been a big fan of that ever since TXF, and it was just so ... sigh. And the OPR review was kickass!

OMFG. *breathes deeply* wow... damn you can write. you MUST write more! it rocks! :D
~J

Yummy! You do unseemliness so well!

Magnificent job, as always.

Can't wait for the next installment.

Ah, something about chapter three. ;) Seriously, great job -- sensual and descriptive without crossing the line. :) Very classy -- a most enjoyable read!! Keep writing!

Well done! A nice glimpse at Jack and Sam as a couple while we are still lefting praying for Jack. Once again a great read from start to finish (and it's only a chapter).

Great job! You really build a lot of suspense here, and I loved the interaction in the hospital. All very realistic and touching. I can't wait till the third chapter! Post more soon please! :D

Another intense chapter -- and I love how you wrote Danny and Sam's friendship! :) Sam's grief and breakdown are heartbreaking as well. Can't wait for more! Keep writing!!

Stepf-I'm overwhelmed at how good this is. I love how Sam is in a crazied state of mind (created by your wonderful imagery and quick sentences) and Danny being moral support. You got me hooked!