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| AGirlBrushedRed 2007-03-06 ch 2,  | abusei LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. pyro's written perfectly. and i love your oc. please update again soon! |
| edeyle 2006-10-11 ch 2, | abuseAmazing. I can't stop thinking about this story, I've re-read it several times. Will you ever finish it? |
| Shaiya 2006-06-05 ch 2, | abuseWow, this is just...amazing. I'm speechless right now, everything in this fic is so real, so beliveable. You have to update! Please...BTW, watch X-3, Pyro gets really hot. |
| Marebear007 2005-12-14 ch 2, | abusethis is absolutely wonderful! you've gotten everyone down perfectly! john, mystique, magneto: all wonderful! and penelope? so not a mary sue, and i completely love her! i really hope you update soon, cause i think i might die if you don't. also, just because her father was not a mutant, doesn't mean that she doesn't have powers, especially since she's a halfbreed. according to the comics and such, halfbreed do exist and their power manifest later on in life, not at puberty like regular mutants. anyway, UPDATE SOON!YOU'RE ON MY FAVE LIST! |
| GuesssWho 2005-11-18 ch 2, | abuseI wonder . . . is she just human? It would be ironic if it turns out the she's a mutant! |
| vampslayer 2005-07-23 ch 2, | abuseI love this story so much, plz update it sometime soon. |
| weaselgirl19 2003-09-27 ch 1, | abuseDefinetly hope to read more soon!! |
| X3 2003-08-03 ch 2, | abuseI really liked this. I hope you update it sometime, It's really interesting. A greay portrayl of Pyro |
| Obiwanfan 2003-07-24 ch 2, | abusePlease update soon, please! i really really like this story, pleaes write more soon. i like how this is going. great story. |
| Obiwanfan 2003-07-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was very good, i really like your point of view on John. you are very good, great story. |
| buffyangelus1 2003-07-22 ch 2, | abusethis is a great fic so far, it's REALLY orginal, and you're a great writer! I hope you update soon! XOXO, Christa |
| fourlane 2003-06-29 ch 2, | abuseWell, seeing as my original chapter 2 review was deleted, I'll review again. This story is just incredible. Really one of the best Pyro stories I've ever read . . . I've read A LOT & none of them were like this. They were mainly those . . . Ryro's -- you know, those Rogue/Pyro pairings that tend to make me sick sometimes. I guess that pairing is fine . . . but how some authors write them . . . Argh. I love how long these chapters are - keeps the readers happy! ;T I noticed that this was started on the 8th of the month, and updated on the 8th of the next, so I'm actually looking forward to that specific date, what a loser, right? Seriously, this is really one of the main things I look for on my favorite's list & I'm sure that when you do update (if no the 8th), the next chapter will be worth it. I LOVE Pyro and I love the whole relationship between John&Penelope. BTW, the prose at the beginning and the last three lines were great. I love your writing style. |
| fourlane 2003-06-18 ch 1, | abusehm. i just noticed that only 13 of the 15 reviews are showing. that's really too bad because these first two chapter are definitely worth much more than that. |
| Applelicious 2003-06-09 ch 2, | abuseYay, you finally updated, I was wondering if you were just gonna abandon this fic, but you didn't, yay again. Can't wait for more, update sooner if you can. ^_^ |
| Dark Angel66 2003-06-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is by far one of the best pyro/oc stories out there, and I really enjoyed it, so keep writing. |