This is a nice story, but there's one MAJOR problem.

Harry wouldn't have any money problems because of all those galleons he has in his bank.

Another thing wrong with the story is that Aurors make decent money. They make a lot, actually.

It's was cute, but those are two big problems you're going to have to sort out.

You are one of my favorite filcet authors!! Great Job!

aw! that was so sweet and cute! *heart melts *
great job! write on!

aw sweet :) harry and hermione... cute hehe, a lot different than the usual d/g! =) wow im reviewing really late i see, but i never really got a chance to read all the great one-shots you've written! anyway.. i loff you too! :-p haha see ya

aw

aw...that was so fluffily cute...verr good, altho feeluing slight nausea right now... ^_^ but it'll pass... but story verry good!

Morgan

p.s.- that was so sweet of Harry...

aw!
that was SO sweet
i agree wit everyone else,
it should be Ron/Herm!~!~!~!~!
and then Harry/Cho!~!
and Draco/Ginny!~!
but, nevertheless, you ARE a great writer!!

that was really sweet! despite the H/HR ness!

i neva thought u were that young (i'm 14 too, but not 4 long mi 15th is in july :( i'll miss bein 14!)

now get back 2 the D/G ness its mich sweeter!

love the PINK princess!

That was awsome!! It was so romantic and sweet!! I loved it!!

AW HOW KAWAII! that is so sweet! fluffy as cotton candy, but i like it ^_^_^_^_^ that's such a cute idea, LoL! though i don't usually go for harry/hermione (i'm a devout ron/hermione shipper) this one is just...AW! ^_^_^_^_^_^_^

luv alwayz,
~'*'priscilla'*'~

Aww! Warm fuzzies! Wonderful warm fuzzies! Now why would you want to go write about cold pricklies?? Why I ask. Just jokes. So are you turning into a H/Hr shipper now? ~looks worriedly at Virtual Fearie~ Is this the end?? The end of all the lovely D/Gness? I need to know so I can go end things right now if it's true. There would be nothing, and I mean NOTHING going for this site if your wonderful D/G stops. ~glares at all other authors~ Well, I suppose I will stop this before I ** someone off.. . ~looks around worriedly~ Wonderful story my dear. Trully lovely.
Love,
Tiny Q

It was very fluffy...but very good...nice job!

ah! the sappiness- it's getting to me! it makes its move slowly, silently. and then, right when you can't defend yourself (afterall, you want to see/read what happens next) it ATTACKS!

alas- it was you! you who sent the small, yet devious, little sap fairy to my doorstep! how could you? and a H/HR at that! (i prefer r/hr) i think to make up for your actions you should update ATCC asap AND HSNO! so there

~the odd one

That was really cute for not writing fluffy all the time. Great job!

Huh.. I always thought you were older ^^ Cute fluffly story ((even if H/Hr isn't my favorite ship))