 ChaosDragon227 2004-07-14 . chapter 5please update soon. |
 Wolf E. Urameshi 2003-11-29 . chapter 5Hi, I got your review, thanks a lot. I got to read a bit of your story, and it's pretty good! I really don't have any complaints at all! Keep it up!
By the way...
1- I added you to my MSN Messenger contact list.
2- I have more Star Fox stories. Care to read?
3- I want more chapters of your fic! |
 JustCallMeWonderboy 2003-08-22 . chapter 1This is very good Please continue I would like to see Falco and Peppy though |
 Derugo 2003-08-08 . chapter 4Good story, I love it! Keep up the good work, and I'm off! |
 D3Fan 2003-08-04 . chapter 4* titlts head to the side* Who in blazes was that blue vixen? Can't be Krystal, she's got only one tail...anyways this is getting good again, and hopefully you'll keep writing it, see you next chapter. |
 Alankria 2003-08-04 . chapter 4glad to see this hasn't died, and I look forward to the next chapter. |
 TechnoSpyder 2003-06-21 . chapter 3Great Great Fun. This is turning out to be a good story. It seems just like an anime. Great job on everybody's characterization too. |
 Alankria 2003-06-08 . chapter 3i see that other people have finally reviewed your story! yay!
am liking how Fox is with Wolf, i assume there'll be some kind of explanation as to how they know each other? would be good. and also how Kitt got hold of the disk (unless i forgot something, she was just some random kid in the run down area of town)
also- don't forget about poor old Slippy- surely he's wondering what's happened to Fox since Fox broke out the big jail place.
other than that.. keep up the good work ^.^ |
 D3Fan 2003-06-07 . chapter 3Ahh, another great chapter, kind funy to see the whole Fox/Wolf thing ther lol.
" I came here for something and it's not hugs"
that had to be the funniest line through the whole story lol, not that everything else wasn't funny. Well keep up the good work hope to see the next chapter soon! |
 D3Fan 2003-05-21 . chapter 2Not that bad of a story man, very interesting, but how are Falco and Peppy going to show up? But hey it's your story I'll let you do it how you want. also i couldn't help but notice that the thing between Rocky and Fox is almost like that thing between Sly and Carmelita in that Sly Cooper game. Got to say that's funny though lol, specially the elevator scene. Well keep writing man, and don't worry if you don't get that many reviews, it's the good ones that count not the quantity. |
 Alankria 2003-05-20 . chapter 2kewl. Fox was behaving like a total prat but it was kinda cute.
I feel like billy no mates being the only one reviewing your story... other people! Hello! Anyone alive? Sod it, they're missing out. I like ur story. |
 Alankria 2003-05-11 . chapter 1looks like I'm the first one to review this- and i like it. you develop a lot of fox's character in just the first chapter, and you leave it a cliffhanger so i ant to know what happens next. it's also different to the other stories i read on here, and dem is it nice to read something different. Keep up the good work. |