Reviews for The Way It Should Be

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xanya-forever 2004-03-05 ch 7,	abuseI kinda get the impression that this fic isn't going to be updated, is it? It's a real shame cos I LOVE IT! This is another chapter that made me cry, and I'm sure you could do that in every following chapter... But even better, you could make me laugh, and make me happy because Syd and Vaughn have been reuinted again! I loved the entire second flash back because it was so damn gorgeous! It made me laugh and it made me happy (hint hint) and I want more of that kind of stuff! I loved the explanation for Vaughn's ring and the inscription brought back those tears... pleas please PLEASE continue this! ON that note, what about your other fics? I miss Chat... EXCELLENT STORY!
xanya-forever 2004-03-05 ch 6,	abuseI seriously feel like crying. OKay, let's all have a roaring chorus of "POOR VAUGHN!" because that's all that's going through my head at the moment. I could feel his pain so deeply that my heart still hasn't recovered... you really do have a gift with the angst. I can see him in my mind's eye, sitting there with a bottle in one hand, his forehead perpetually wrinkled, eyes glued to the wall but not really seeing it. I loved his conversation with Weiss, as it was veyr realistic. Hmm, let me just get rid of that lump in my throat, okeydokey? Damn, there's only one more chapter left, and I get the feeling that it won't resolve it... but hopefully! Anyway, absolutely brilliant chapter.
xanya-forever 2004-03-05 ch 5,	abuseYeah, why is he wearing that ring if he's not married? I loved Jack's empathy with poor old Crying!Vaughn but really, whose heart wouldn't break for him? I'm so overwhelmingly happy for Vaughn that Syd's back and he's NOT married, but I wish Syd would try and be over joyed too. I mean, I understand she has just found out that two years of her life have gone... but Vaughn is crying and telling her he loves her!
xanya-forever 2004-03-05 ch 4,	abuseOh the sadness... Still, there is the very high point of having SpyDaddy and Vaughn working together! That's just so darn cute. I really loved this bit: “She’s not just valuable to me Eric. I- I don’t know how the hell I’m supposed to live without her now that I’ve known what it’s like to be loved by her, to wake up next to her- - how can any man go back to the dismal life he used to live after that?
xanya-forever 2004-03-05 ch 3,	abuseWow, Marshall's babbling was so... Marshallistic. It was totally the kind of thing I could imagine him saying on the show, so go you! By the way, I've figured out that you wrote this BEFORE seeing season three, so that's why there was no fire. I'm really on the ball, hey? When Vaughn thought Syd was dead - well I can only imagine what he's going to feel like later on. I really liked that he thought she was immortal, that's a pretty cool idea. Great chapter, especially with the characterization.
xanya-forever 2004-03-05 ch 2,	abuseOh gosh, I felt Vaughn's desperation and urgency along with him. ANd it was not very nice. My heart's racing and I find this strange considering I know exactly what happens. Wait a second, wasn't there a fire in her house? Argh, confusion! You wrote (once again) Vaughn's feelings really well. It was so cute how he was whistling up her stairs and thinking about Santa Barbara. Too bad damn JJ had to break everyone's hearts... GREAT CHAPTER.
xanya-forever 2004-03-05 ch 1,	abuseHm, how on earth did I miss this? Perhaps it's because I've avoided spoilers so scrupulously and this fell in that category... But anyway, now that season three has FINALLY begun in Australia, i can start reading Alias fanfic again. I loved this first chapter! The emotion in Vaughn - breaking down and sobbing and being so happy - well it was such a wonderful change from what actually happened. Then there was Syd, with her COMPLETELY righteous anger that you wrote so well. I'm so glad Vaughn told Syd that he loved her! That really made my day. The best bit? THAT HE ISN'T MARRIED! Oh that makes my heart sing. Anyway, on with the next chapter...
Noelle17 2004-02-19 ch 7,	abuseLATER?? Later should be now.
JoAnn13 2003-06-26 ch 7,	abusehm...update soon!i really like it:)
Jamie 2003-06-19 ch 7, anon.	abusePlease add to this story! I am having major Alias withdrawal and your stories are one the very few that compare to the actual show! I am dying to know why Vaughn has the ring! Pretty please finish it, or at least add to it! I love your stories!! Thank you so much!!
jam 2003-06-14 ch 7, anon.	abuseomg! please finish it cus the suspense is killing me! the only thing, though, is that all the flashbacks make it sort of confusing
Total Vartan Lover 2003-06-09 ch 7,	abuseI think i have officially become a Jenfic fan! I loved your story! Despite how short the entries are, they are so freaking good. Wow. Amazing. That's all i have to say. keep up the good work. and it would really mean alot to me if you can review my "other side of the story," please. that would be the greatest. Wow, that's all ihave to say. wow
Yostamaca 2003-06-09 ch 7, anon.	abuseSCREAMS YOU NEED TO BE A WRITER FOR THE SHOW! WE NEED TO GET CONNECTIONS FOR YOU!
Ryanne 2003-06-09 ch 7, anon.	abuseAw...that was so sweet! i was waiting for u to update! I can;t wait~ its going to be good! Please Update soon!
Kat 2003-06-09 ch 7, anon.	abuseHumph. That was NOT much of an explanation!! but it was still really romantic and sweet, and i liked it alot. (as usual). i thought the bar flashback was kinda funny. :) I still need more about the ring though! ~Kat P.S. hehe...CB updates...hehe...

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